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Breathe Me In

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freespiritfem
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since 10-07-1999
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0 posted 10-08-1999 03:47 PM       View Profile for freespiritfem   Email freespiritfem   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for freespiritfem


Come to me "My Love",and
breathe me in,
Knowing all the places to
begin.
Bring me to that special
place of bliss,
Getting lost in your
eyes,this i miss.

Together,our bodies so close
we become "One",
I know all our trips to
ecstasy have just begun.
As i close my eyes it seems
like only yesterday,
Entangled in your body is
where i want to stay.

As i drink you in my thirst
for you gets stronger,
With the "Love" we share
there is no wonder.
The memories of "Us" will
always last,
We wont shut the door,we will
just visit the past.

My heart was asleep like a
dormant volcano,
With your love ,it has
awakened and is about to
explode.
My soul so desolte and dark,
But now it glows with a
magical spark.

So come to me and breathe me
in,
We know now just where to
begin.

1999 Paula Diane S.


David G. i love you so
"deeply" and
"passionately"...thank you
for awaking this spirit in
me!!!

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Paula Diane S.
© Copyright 1999 Paula D. Stone - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 10-08-1999 04:00 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Breathtakingly beautiful!

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Denise
Jucco
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2 posted 10-08-1999 05:15 PM       View Profile for Jucco   Email Jucco   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Jucco

Oh, Paula..I can feel the passion in your words,this is a beautiful and heartfelt piece of work, Very well done,i'm looking forward to more of work.

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Lee D.
freespiritfem
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3 posted 10-08-1999 07:19 PM       View Profile for freespiritfem   Email freespiritfem   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for freespiritfem

if anyone can give me any suggestions , please, i need all the input i can get..thanks bunches!!!!

Huggs!!!

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Paula Diane S.
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart


4 posted 10-08-1999 10:04 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

You are very expressive and passionate! Loved your Poem!
hoot_owl_rn
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5 posted 10-09-1999 12:00 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Absolutely beautiful.....I love these lines :
"As i drink you in my thirst
for you gets stronger,"
Welcome to Passions!!


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Man can not discover new oceans unless he has the courage to lose sight of the shore.
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley


6 posted 10-09-1999 06:54 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Lovely poem with a depth of feeling.
Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 10-09-1999 09:03 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

freespiritfem,
Well done enjoyed the read.
freespiritfem
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8 posted 10-09-1999 05:43 PM       View Profile for freespiritfem   Email freespiritfem   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for freespiritfem

Thank you all for your kind words and replys,
this means very much too me...
thanks:dsnyder,Jucco,Romantic Heart,hoot_owl_rn,Poet deVine,and Seymour Tabin

BIG HUGGS!!!

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Paula Diane S.
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9 posted 10-09-1999 05:48 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

This is wonderful, Paula. There is never enough uplifting and romantic poetry....especially when it is so well done.
Pepper
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10 posted 10-09-1999 06:11 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

a very lovely piece freespiritfem.....very passionate

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
Alwye
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In the space between moments


11 posted 10-09-1999 09:55 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Simply Stunning....

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*Krista Knutson*

Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller


lonly_Heart
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12 posted 10-10-1999 11:38 AM       View Profile for lonly_Heart   Email lonly_Heart   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for lonly_Heart

I really love the "passion" in your words,simply beautiful!!!

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Elizabeth
Martie
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13 posted 10-10-1999 04:40 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

This love you feel makes beautiful poetry. "Breathe Me In" is such a great phrase.
freespiritfem
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14 posted 10-14-1999 02:17 PM       View Profile for freespiritfem   Email freespiritfem   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for freespiritfem

Thanks Pepper, Alwye,Balladeer,Martie.and Lonly_heart!!!

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Paula Diane S.
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on the threshold of a dream


15 posted 10-14-1999 02:28 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Beautiful!
Iloveit
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16 posted 10-14-1999 03:14 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

very passionate, very beautiful
charamyst
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17 posted 10-27-1999 07:09 PM       View Profile for charamyst   Email charamyst   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for charamyst

This is very beautiful, you make me feel your passion. I am new to this and hope you will read some of my work and give me your honest opinion.
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18 posted 05-16-2004 07:55 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

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