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miriam
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0 posted 10-08-1999 03:00 PM       View Profile for miriam   Email miriam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for miriam

I could sitll hear your voice,
"I love you with all my heart"
I was left with no other choice,
Very sadly I depart.

I'm gonna miss your face,
The way you made me smile.
I only wish that you could stay,
And play with me a little while.

Why did you have to lie to me?
Where did you learn how to do it so well?
If you would look inside of me,
All I do is dwell.

You're gone I know,
But it's still hard.
My feelings I can't show,
Be still my broken heart.

I'm gonna miss you,
But I have to much pride.
To let you walk all over me,
And leave when I start to cry.
© Copyright 1999 miriam coronado - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 10-08-1999 03:25 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very sad, Miriam. And very well expressed.

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Denise
toocute4u_27
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2 posted 10-08-1999 05:45 PM       View Profile for toocute4u_27   Email toocute4u_27   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit toocute4u_27's Home Page   View IP for toocute4u_27

very sad and touching poem. I remember those feelings its nice to know you can break free. The heart does heal. Good work.
hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 10-09-1999 12:37 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Very touching Mariam
miriam
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4 posted 10-10-1999 01:55 AM       View Profile for miriam   Email miriam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for miriam

thank you all...im sorry i didn't respone any sooner. Toocute...exactly when does the healing process begin?

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miriam coronado


MEGAN
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5 posted 10-10-1999 02:29 AM       View Profile for MEGAN   Email MEGAN   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MEGAN

I remember those feelings so well.. As i read this poem, tears streamed down my face..i have not lost this pain or feelin, it has been dwelling within for too long, but i do not how to heal just like you.
Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 10-10-1999 02:23 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Miriam,
Well done enjoyed the read.
miriam
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7 posted 10-10-1999 03:23 PM       View Profile for miriam   Email miriam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for miriam

It's bound to happen someday Megan...i promise..just hold on.
 
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