you're gone - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Open Poetry #3

you're gone

miriam
Member

since 1999-08-26

Posts 323
glendale,ca.

0 posted 1999-10-08 03:00 PM

I could sitll hear your voice,
"I love you with all my heart"
I was left with no other choice,
Very sadly I depart.

I'm gonna miss your face,
The way you made me smile.
I only wish that you could stay,
And play with me a little while.

Why did you have to lie to me?
Where did you learn how to do it so well?
If you would look inside of me,
All I do is dwell.

You're gone I know,
But it's still hard.
My feelings I can't show,
Be still my broken heart.

I'm gonna miss you,
But I have to much pride.
To let you walk all over me,
And leave when I start to cry.

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-10-08 03:25 PM

Very sad, Miriam. And very well expressed.

------------------
Denise

toocute4u_27
Junior Member

since 1999-10-01

Posts 26
Holdenville, OK USA

2 posted 1999-10-08 05:45 PM

very sad and touching poem. I remember those feelings its nice to know you can break free. The heart does heal. Good work.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

3 posted 1999-10-09 12:37 PM

Very touching Mariam

miriam
Member

since 1999-08-26

Posts 323
glendale,ca.

4 posted 1999-10-10 01:55 AM

thank you all...im sorry i didn't respone any sooner. Toocute...exactly when does the healing process begin?

------------------
miriam coronado

MEGAN
Junior Member

since 1999-08-16

Posts 17
Cottonwood, Ca United States

5 posted 1999-10-10 02:29 AM

I remember those feelings so well.. As i read this poem, tears streamed down my face..i have not lost this pain or feelin, it has been dwelling within for too long, but i do not how to heal just like you.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 1999-10-10 02:23 PM

Miriam,
Well done enjoyed the read.

miriam
Member

since 1999-08-26

Posts 323
glendale,ca.

7 posted 1999-10-10 03:23 PM

It's bound to happen someday Megan...i promise..just hold on.

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.