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Metamorphosis

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Echo Rhayne
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0 posted 10-08-1999 01:58 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Echo Rhayne

In the passions of youth, the dragons are fierce
with many great things to pursue.
With deeds to be done and love to be won,
and preparing for what may ensue.

With the passing of time the passions subside,
and the dragons become less severe.
With love at one's side a peace grows inside,
and the best of one's life now is here.

In the twilight of life the dragons have died,
and the great deeds forgot or unclear.
But love still flows strong, and what may have gone wrong
is eclipsed by what we hold dear.


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~*~ I write to know I am alive ~*~
© Copyright 1999 Echo Rhayne - All Rights Reserved
DreamEvil
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1 posted 10-08-1999 02:08 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

I agree with you, Echo.

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
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2 posted 10-08-1999 04:16 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

I like this very much...
Denise
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3 posted 10-08-1999 08:33 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Absolutely beautiful, Echo!

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caroline
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4 posted 10-08-1999 08:51 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

A first-class work, Echo Very well done.

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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats

WhtDove
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5 posted 10-08-1999 10:41 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

You hold me in Awe! Your talent is boundless. I loved this!
hoot_owl_rn
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6 posted 10-08-1999 11:54 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Echo, you are quite the talented poet....I really enjoyed this

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Man can not discover new oceans unless he has the courage to lose sight of the shore.
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7 posted 10-09-1999 06:52 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Echo, this is one of your best! I like the use of the dragon in this one! For one so young, you are so wise!
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