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Munda
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0 posted 1999-10-08 01:56 PM


I search the depths of my soul
To find an answer to my quest
I’m searching high, I’m searching low
Who is he, the source of my restlessness
If I only knew you are reality and not imagination
You’d give me the strenght to endure my disharmony
Perhaps you are only a selfish creation
Then my soul will be empty, without any sense of reality

What answer will I find to this cry of my soul
My search for a love beyond human comprehension
Will it be disappointment, despair, a life with no goal
Or will devine love be my compagnion



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Denise
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1 posted 1999-10-08 08:27 PM


Truly a cry of the soul. Beautiful!

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Denise

Munda
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2 posted 1999-10-09 09:22 PM


Thank you Denise. Eventhough you're the one and only reply, it gives me the courage to try it again. : )
Julie
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3 posted 1999-10-09 09:25 PM


Munda,
This was a truly beautiful piece. Looking foward to seeing more.

Denise
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4 posted 1999-10-09 09:25 PM


Oh, Munda, please please continue! This forum is just so busy that sometimes things slip down so fast before anyone gets a chance to see them.

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Denise

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5 posted 1999-10-09 09:39 PM


Awesome..I can truly relate to this. Please continue, you have talent, Munda. Welcome to Passions!

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*Krista Knutson*

Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller



Munda
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6 posted 1999-10-09 10:51 PM


Thanks everybody for your kind words, you leave me ......without words !
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