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A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 1999-10-08 03:53 AM

Dreamland awaits you,
Close your eyes,

Imagine you and I,
Close as breath,

Skin upon skin,
Lips touching,

For you taste of Raspberries,
sweetly irrisistable,

The fragrance of you,
Takes my breath away,

I am burning inside,
A tourch of fire,

Burning fuel of passion,
For you are my desire,

My heart beats with every breath,
You are my destiny,

Your eyes evade me,
deep, dark, mysterious,

I am your slave,
Your love has captured me,

Grab my body,
Pull me close,

Show me your love,
In ways I could only dream.

Wake me I must be dreaming,
This is a fairytale.

Christopher

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration

1 posted 1999-10-08 04:52 AM

BRAVO!!!
Well done, short but PASSIONATE! Sizzling hot!

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

2 posted 1999-10-08 03:58 PM

Sizzle,,,sizzle...!!!

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 1999-10-08 08:43 PM

Sizzling, Sizzling, Sizzling!! (I like that word and, of course, the poem!)

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Denise

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

4 posted 1999-10-09 12:29 PM

Whew...did someone turn up the heat in here?? Nicely done romantic

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

5 posted 1999-10-09 07:07 AM

I like the raspberries!!!!! This is beautiful..it flows so nicely!

Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

6 posted 1999-10-21 09:12 PM

This definitely deserves a lift to the top....wow....awesome work.

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*Krista Knutson*

I walk with the multitude, yet alone am I in their midst. -- Daniel L. Miller

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

7 posted 1999-10-22 12:33 PM

WOW!!! Think I need a cold shower! Fantastic!!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

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