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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart


0 posted 10-08-1999 03:53 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for A Romantic Heart


Dreamland awaits you,
Close your eyes,

Imagine you and I,
Close as breath,

Skin upon skin,
Lips touching,

For you taste of Raspberries,
sweetly irrisistable,

The fragrance of you,
Takes my breath away,

I am burning inside,
A tourch of fire,

Burning fuel of passion,
For you are my desire,

My heart beats with every breath,
You are my destiny,

Your eyes evade me,
deep, dark, mysterious,

I am your slave,
Your love has captured me,

Grab my body,
Pull me close,

Show me your love,
In ways I could only dream.

Wake me I must be dreaming,
This is a fairytale.


© Copyright 1999 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration


1 posted 10-08-1999 04:52 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

BRAVO!!!
Well done, short but PASSIONATE! Sizzling hot!
A Romantic Heart
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2 posted 10-08-1999 03:58 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Sizzle,,,sizzle...!!!
Denise
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3 posted 10-08-1999 08:43 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Sizzling, Sizzling, Sizzling!! (I like that word and, of course, the poem!)

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Denise
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Glen Hope, PA USA


4 posted 10-09-1999 12:29 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Whew...did someone turn up the heat in here?? Nicely done romantic
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley


5 posted 10-09-1999 07:07 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

I like the raspberries!!!!! This is beautiful..it flows so nicely!
Alwye
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In the space between moments


6 posted 10-21-1999 09:12 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

This definitely deserves a lift to the top....wow....awesome work.

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*Krista Knutson*

I walk with the multitude, yet alone am I in their midst. -- Daniel L. Miller

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7 posted 10-22-1999 12:33 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

WOW!!! Think I need a cold shower! Fantastic!!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
 
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