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Systematic Decay
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That place with padded walls a


0 posted 10-08-1999 01:36 AM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Systematic Decay

Outside for the first time
In ever so long
My nostrils are greeted with
The familiar scent
Of simple decay
The car exhaust fumes
Rotten earth
Deterioration
Of the human spirit
I smile
I am home.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-
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Isis
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1 posted 10-08-1999 01:42 AM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

You are a negative nelly tonight aren't you? Nice job though.

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How long after you are gone will ripples remain as evidence that you were cast into the pool?
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


DreamEvil
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2 posted 10-08-1999 12:55 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Not negative at all, I think. Those are the familiar smells of my home as well.

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
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3 posted 10-08-1999 07:11 PM       View Profile for suicidal dreams   Email suicidal dreams   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suicidal dreams

Good job love.

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life is short kill quick
 
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