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Doute Moi

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Alain DeLaCendres
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0 posted 10-08-1999 01:02 AM       View Profile for Alain DeLaCendres   Email Alain DeLaCendres   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Alain DeLaCendres

*note: Any suggestions on which version is more correct and explanitory?

Examinez mes oeils.
Qu'est-ce que tu sièges?
Rien du tout?
Peut-être mon amour pour toi?

Je doute si tu sièges quoi que ce soit,
si peu que ce soit.
Tu sait quoi...
ce douleur.

Mais je fait le pitre...
j'amoureux de toi toujours.

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Examinez mes yeux.
Que voyez-vous?
Rien du tout?
Puet-être mon amour pour vous?

Je doute que vous voyez n'importante quoi du tout,
ne rein du tout.
Vous savez ce qui...
ce a blessante.

Mais je joue l'imbécile...
je vous aime toujours.

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and the English version..
*

Examine my eyes.
What do you see?
Nothing at all?
Maybe my love for you?

I doubt whether you see anything at all,
anything at all.
Tou know what...
that hurts.

But I play the fool...
I still love you.

11:13pm / 10-5-99


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Tout s'en va, tout passe, l'eau coule, et le couer oublie.

[This message has been edited by Alain DeLaCendres (edited 10-08-1999).]
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Dragoness
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1 posted 10-08-1999 07:27 AM       View Profile for Dragoness   Email Dragoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dragoness's Home Page   View IP for Dragoness

Nice free verse.Unfortunatly my French is terrible,can offer any help there.

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.

hoot_owl_rn
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Beautiful, what more can I say.
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