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Master
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since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 1999-10-07 11:52 PM


Escaping the heaven’s locked cage
A golden ray pierced through a cloud
Slowly stretching towards the stage
Where a poet was reading out loud
Slowly losing its warmth and ability
The ray of light fell far from reality
Illuminating the stage with divinity
Where a soul achieved immortality


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I fell in love and kept on falling

© Copyright 1999 Andrey Kneller - All Rights Reserved
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 1999-10-08 01:36 AM


Beautiful my friend

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How long after you are gone will ripples remain as evidence that you were cast into the pool?
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



Master
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since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867
Boston, MA
2 posted 1999-10-08 03:07 PM


Thanks Isis!
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