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RobertB
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104
Champaign, IL

0 posted 1999-10-07 10:44 PM


Contradiction

Universal forces
in a tug of war
by gravitational pulling...
pushing thoughts in orbit
around the synapses
making sense
of chaos
when words pool collectively
planetarially revolving
around the heart
as I see the contradictions
in you…..
feeling them in me
drawing us together
in alliance forever.

RB


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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-10-07 11:08 PM


They also say opposites attract! Another good one, Robert!

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Denise

Julie
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since 1999-08-20
Posts 739
Houston, TX
2 posted 1999-10-07 11:31 PM


Nice twist on this Robert. Very pleasing
to read.

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Julie
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Thou who has given so much to me,
give one thing more: a grateful heart.
>George Herbert




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