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what is love(challenge from systematic decay)

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suicidal dreams
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0 posted 10-07-1999 09:43 PM       View Profile for suicidal dreams   Email suicidal dreams   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for suicidal dreams

a false idea
a dream followed
a dream destroyed
a despair filled tradegy
a despair filled emptyness
a desolate man
a desolate life
a dead end to this teen
a dead end to this life

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life is short kill quick
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1 posted 10-07-1999 10:06 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Love's loss can hurt, even seem to kill us. Hang in there. Time does heal all things. You have expressed the pain so expertly.

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Good poem, although the ending was so hopeless......As long as you have hope...it will all work out.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-
 
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