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Lynn
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since 1999-09-20
Posts 316
Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.

0 posted 1999-10-07 09:32 PM



A Night of Pure Passion!

I went to your house last night
and nervously knocked on your door.
I saw a shadow through the window
and my heart raced at the thought of you.
The door slowly opened
and I felt a bit of faint.
It was you, rising from the black room
with your hair all a mess.
You were dressed in shorts and a T-shirt
your night time attire.
You looked like you had been asleep
for quit some time.
I felt awful, waking you from a sleep,
I know how important it is to you.
I had to see you though.
One more lonesome night would kill me.
You invited me in, and asked me if I
wanted a drink.
I said yes, but also, I said I wanted to
talk to you about days gone by.
You agreed, and we sat down at the
kitchen counter and slow drank.
I was nervous about being there.
I had this feeling that I was not wanted.
Your hospitality was sincere,
and you even began talking first.
You have no idea how much that
meant to me.
We talked about old times,
the good and the bad.
We talked about recent times,
how you are, and how I am.
Time flew by so fast.
I wish that night had lasted forever.
But as I awoke the next morning,
I was laying next to you, in your bed.
And that meant the world to me.
I hope it also meant the world to you.


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"I Believe we are divine by nature." -Jewel

Grace is the refinement of a soul over time. -Jewel

© Copyright 1999 Jennifer Lynn Bonham - All Rights Reserved
Wet
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since 1999-07-25
Posts 60
Brentwood, Tn
1 posted 1999-10-07 09:37 PM


I too blelive in deep love if you may call it that. I love your poem and can relate as well. Good Job.
Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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2 posted 1999-10-07 09:42 PM


Very well written. This flowed so easily!

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Denise

Lynn
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since 1999-09-20
Posts 316
Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.
3 posted 1999-10-07 10:43 PM


Thank you bothvery much for the comments...I appreciate it...
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