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Free Passage (Challange from RobertB)

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Denise
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0 posted 10-07-1999 08:48 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Denise

Found in the mind's
A universe
A treasure trove
With gems diverse!

A wondrous land
Of star-dust dreams
So magical
Its bright moon beams!

Adventures grand
Await the heart
The passage - free
So journey start!

Explore new worlds
Traipse hill and glen
Perhaps a jaunt
To 'way-back-when'!

Upon great seas
The soul can sail
Chart any course
No plan can fail!

Be rich or poor
life's circumstance
Amongst the stars
there - all can dance!



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© Copyright 1999 Denise - All Rights Reserved
Severn
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1 posted 10-07-1999 09:14 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

What a vision! Love the use of those ! marks.
Excellent.
Isis
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2 posted 10-07-1999 09:30 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

A vision indeed!! Well done as always Denise..

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How long after you are gone will ripples remain as evidence that you were cast into the pool?
~Isis~
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RobertB
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3 posted 10-07-1999 10:39 PM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RobertB

Alright Denise!!!!!!!!!!!! Yippeeee

RB

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.
Denise
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4 posted 10-07-1999 11:05 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Severn, Isis and Robert, thank you so much!

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Denise
Julie
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5 posted 10-07-1999 11:37 PM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julie

Just Beautiful Denise.

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Julie
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Thou who has given so much to me,
give one thing more: a grateful heart.
>George Herbert



Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 10-08-1999 08:53 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Denice,
Well done a keeper.
Denise
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7 posted 10-08-1999 04:10 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Julie and Seymour, thank you for reading and commenting!

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Denise
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smooooooooooches Denise,

kutgw!!

HA
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9 posted 11-03-1999 11:47 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Absolutely Lovely!!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
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10 posted 11-03-1999 07:48 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thank you, H.A. and Watcher! As always, I appreciate your reading and commenting!

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Denise

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11 posted 11-03-1999 11:11 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

I love it
Denise
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12 posted 11-03-1999 11:16 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thanks Hoot!

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Denise

Craig
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13 posted 11-04-1999 06:47 PM       View Profile for Craig   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Craig

Well written ( as ever ).

Short lines are the hardest to write and you have done it here so well.

Craig

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Yes, I admit your general rule. That every poet is a fool:
But I myself may serve to show it. That every fool is not a poet.

WhtDove
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Exceeded the challenge. Great one D!
Systematic Decay
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15 posted 11-04-1999 07:33 PM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

Denise, I agree with Chris....short lines are very difficult, and this was wonderful.

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.


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16 posted 11-04-1999 09:19 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thank you, Craig, WhtDove and Sys for your kind comments! Wow, ya mean I did something that is difficult!!! *feeling so smart* hehehehehehe...seriously, it didn't seem difficult...but then again, what do I know!

Thanks again!

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Denise

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yes
 
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