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I'll cry, and cry, and cry,...

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Kitty**
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since 07-27-99
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Charlottesville,VA USA


0 posted 10-07-1999 07:21 PM       View Profile for Kitty**   Email Kitty**   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Kitty**'s Home Page   View IP for Kitty**


Tonight I'll cry, for the last time.
Tears will pour, like a torrential rain.
I'll cry till my tears, stop streaming,
and my heart, erupts from the pain.

I'll cry for the fruit that's forbidden.
Cries that will echo, for all time.
For my wishing to be with the one,
that I know in my heart won't be mine.

I'll give in, to the agony that adorns me,
and to the misery, that consumes my soul.
But after tonight, I'll no longer cry,
I will be playing, a different role.

My tears will be for my lover, my life,
and for things, that I wanted to be.
But most of all, for the belief that I had,
that in time, he could learn to love me.

My tears will be, behind me tomorrow.
I won't speak, of my love again.
Maybe, in the arms of another,
I can bring, my heartaches to an end.

I'll cry for the mistakes that I've made.
I'll cry for the shame of me.
But all of my tears can never erase,
my love for a man, that's not free.

So I'll cry, and cry, and cry, and cry,
for how ever, long it may take.
Then I'll dry my eyes, Lock up my heart,
forever, for my own sake!
© Copyright 1999 Kitty Sandridge - All Rights Reserved
Morrigan
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since 10-07-1999
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1 posted 10-07-1999 07:27 PM       View Profile for Morrigan   Email Morrigan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Morrigan

Wow, have I been there a thousand times...
Denise
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2 posted 10-07-1999 08:11 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

The pain in this is intense. Very well written.

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Denise
Tara Simms
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since 08-12-99
Posts 1285
Honea Path, SC USA


3 posted 10-07-1999 09:30 PM       View Profile for Tara Simms   Email Tara Simms   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tara Simms's Home Page   View IP for Tara Simms

I can feel your anguish in this. Excellent writing.

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It matters not how strait the gate;
How charged with punishments the scroll;
I am the master of my fate:
I am the captain of my soul.
--W.E. Henley
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Kitty**
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4 posted 10-07-1999 10:32 PM       View Profile for Kitty**   Email Kitty**   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Kitty**'s Home Page   View IP for Kitty**

This poem is pretty deep.

I'm singing a Crystal Gail song for encouragement..
I'll get over you,
I'll be through, and when I do,
I'll be good as new,
When I get over you..
The words may not be exactly right, but you get the drift, Huh?? ;-)

Thanks all for your replys!!
poetFemmeFatale
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since 07-25-99
Posts 2961
Arkansas


5 posted 10-07-1999 11:50 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Hey Kitty, I see you're somewhat new, but I just wanted to say hey welcome...It's funny, I signed on to post something I just wrote, and I saw your title....mine is called " Cry & cry & cry "...written to my dad...I just thought that was kind of cool, since yours was still on the first page...guess we're having the same kind of day, huh? Glad to be able to see your poem and say HI !! Look forward to more of your work! You wanna share Kleenex? I'm almost out - - (sigh)

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale


Kitty**
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6 posted 10-08-1999 12:06 AM       View Profile for Kitty**   Email Kitty**   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Kitty**'s Home Page   View IP for Kitty**

Hey poetFemmeFatale : Thanks for the welcome.
I've been around for a few months..posted here and there.

What is it with all the tears here?? Maybe the name should be "the
crying cavern" LOL..Every visit here brings on the tears for me. ;-)

I'm out of kleenex my dear, but I'll gladly share the tolite tissue with you.
See ya here.
Isis
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since 09-06-99
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7 posted 10-08-1999 01:28 AM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Firstly I'd like to say welcome too!!
A sad sad poem my friend. But don't lock up your heart forever, you may miss Mr.Right.

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How long after you are gone will ripples remain as evidence that you were cast into the pool?
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


miriam
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since 08-26-99
Posts 334
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8 posted 10-08-1999 02:29 PM       View Profile for miriam   Email miriam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for miriam

kitty...I'm going through the same pain right now. Believe it or not tears are rolling down my face right now. I'm supposed to see him today for the last time. What am I to do?? The pain does go away though kitty. I wrote two poems regarding this. someone replied to me and told me that there is someone out there who is perfect for the other. Hang in there, keep your head high and remember that you're worth much more. Now...if only I could take my own advice I wouldn't be hurting so much.
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9 posted 10-08-1999 04:11 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Kitty dear, I have been there before and can really feel your pain...it is very well expressed. Now here's a Kleenex for you...

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

"Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near..."

hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
Posts 11105
Glen Hope, PA USA


10 posted 10-09-1999 12:40 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

wonderfully expressed pain in this one...but do not close your heart, it's hard to open it once you have
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