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The Dance (revised)

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Mike
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0 posted 10-07-1999 05:48 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Mike

Feel the music in your heart,
Touching softly, 'twill impart,
Upon the soul, heartfelt romance,
Two joined as one in sensual dance,
Passions coursing through the night,
Swaying softly, in Luna's light,
In song's reprise, love's symphony,
I sought my love, please come to me,
Sweet songs embrace, deep satin kiss,
I sought, I found, my mortal bliss,
But then the dawn, into the night,
The music fades in morn's first light,
On final note, so ends the dance,
As dancers wait for love's next chance
To turn away the lance of pain,
And dance again the sweet refrain.

Strains of Gershwin soothe the night,
With songs of love, Eros' delight,
Music kisses on the soul,
As passion's note, our hearts control,
Silence broken by the dance
Of two entwined, in song's romance,
Trembling as the harpist's string,
As from the heavens muses sing,
Dulcinea, come to me,
Together through eternity,
In my arms shall ever sway,
Throughout the nights, til break of day,
And with first light the dance is done,
Until once more the setting sun,
O' how I hunger for the night,
To dance once more, by heaven's light.


© Copyright 1999 Mike - All Rights Reserved
Dragoness
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1 posted 10-07-1999 06:32 PM       View Profile for Dragoness   Email Dragoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dragoness's Home Page   View IP for Dragoness

Very nice.Loved this poem!

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.

hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 10-07-1999 07:41 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

beautifully written a symphony in words
Denise
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3 posted 10-07-1999 08:07 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Mike, I could feel the 'Rhythm of the Night'! Excellent!

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4 posted 10-07-1999 08:23 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

You conducted this symphony beautifully, Maestro

It is truly superb.

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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats
Mike
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5 posted 10-07-1999 10:50 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Thank you all for your comments...
this is one of my personal favorites...
A Romantic Heart
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6 posted 10-08-1999 02:46 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Your poem is so beautiful and it took me back to the renasience period...In which I feel I came from...Very heartfelt and romantic love poetry!
Nan
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7 posted 10-09-1999 09:54 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

I think it may be one of mine too, Mike...
 
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