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Waves of Emotions
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Waves of Emotions |
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freespiritfem Junior Member
since 1999-10-07
Posts 49Cordova,Alabama,USA |
Waves of emotions, over me they flow, Bathing in the warmth of my feelngs as they grow. Alive,my skin, so sensitive to their touch, Wanting and needing to experience them so much. Always on my mind when we are apart, Longing "Desperately" to touch your heart. Memories of "US" invading my minds space, Forever living in thatvery "Special" place. You have made me feel the passion,joy,and pleasure, In words alone,My love for you can not be measured. Piching Myselfand asking,"Is this a dream or is it Real?", Knowing these are feelings of love,that only true lovers could possibly feel. "My Love",You are like a deep craving hunger, Knowing I can not live without you for very much longer. Desires I have for "YOU"can not be satisfied, Only being in "YOUR" arms could they start to be gratified. As i close my eyes you are here, My bright and shinning star so near. Just to touch your face,kiss your lips,and hold you tight, Only then will everything feel so perfect and right. Loving you...my Darlin...always and forever,so passionately, Wanting and needing "YOU" so desperately. Myfeelings of love for you...will keep on growing, As waves of emotions keep on flowing. ©1999 Paula Diane S. This is the first time I have ever posted and the firsttime i have let anyone read anything have written, i was just scared to let anyone to see my inner emotions, but thanks to Ron, he has gave me the lil ush I've neede...so Thanks Ron..your a Great person!!!!! ------------------ Paula Diane S. |
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Ron
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-05-19
Posts 8669Michigan, US |
See, I told it wasn't so tough! I'm sure everyone here will give you a warm welcome, too. And the poem is a good one, very heartfelt. Indeed, I know we've all felt that way a time or two (some around here more recently than others  )Welcome aboard, Paula![This message has been edited by Ron (edited 10-07-1999).] |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
yep, liked it very much, hope you like it here and post more, I am fairly new too, and just love it here |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
I especially liked "you are like a deep craving hunger", it made me feel the deep desire...nice work. ------------------ Julie ------------------------- Thou who has given so much to me, give one thing more: a grateful heart. >George Herbert |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
"As waves of emotions keep on flowing"--perfect! As Ron said, some of us are feeling this now. :-) ------------------ It matters not how strait the gate; How charged with punishments the scroll; I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul. --W.E. Henley Visit my poetry website: www.geocities.com/Paris/Musee/9954/ |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
This is a nice poem.. I hope to see more posts from you in the future.. welcome to our home! ------------------ Not all poems I write are about me personally, yet they do come from MY soul. |
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freespiritfem Junior Member
since 1999-10-07
Posts 49Cordova,Alabama,USA |
tank you all for making me fell at home...i've neede a place where i could fit in and just be "myself" Thank you again huggs! ------------------ Paula Diane S. |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
You've found the right place... HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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freespiritfem Junior Member
since 1999-10-07
Posts 49Cordova,Alabama,USA |
I feel so much love from you all, such kind and thoughtful people.. It's nice to be able to feel other ppls. emotions,to see into the windows of others souls...i've been alone too long i no longer feel, like i'm the only person inthe world....thank you all for your lovely,emotional, and heartfelt words!!! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I'm very pleased to welcome another new poet to our passionate family. I could certainly feel the "Waves of Emotion" in this work. I look forward to reading more from you. Keep 'em coming, Paula... Nancy |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very, very well done! I enjoyed reading this and I'm glad that Ron persuaded you to post it! ------------------ Denise |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Heartfelt, beautiful work. Welcome to our Passions family.  ------------------ *Krista Knutson* Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Beautiful, nothing to be shy about here is there? Looking forward to seeing more of your work soon. And welcome to Passions ------------------ How long after you are gone will ripples remain as evidence that you were cast into the pool? ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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freespiritfem Junior Member
since 1999-10-07
Posts 49Cordova,Alabama,USA |
I just want to thank you all for making me feel welcomed and for your all your sweet comments....i just hate that i didnt find this place sooner, and that i waited for years for someone else to read my written thoughts!!! You Guys are the BEST!!!! HUGGSSSS!!!!! ------------------ Paula Diane S. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Nicely done,Great poem....welcome to Passions..keep them coming! |
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Jucco New Member
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3austin,Texas,Usa |
If your writing this about someone you love,i can see the truly deep feelings you have for him,also,i love how you ended it to, i'm new here to, keep posting...your doing a great job!!! ------------------ Lee D. |
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freespiritfem Junior Member
since 1999-10-07
Posts 49Cordova,Alabama,USA |
thank you lee,yes this is about a very "SPECIAL MAN' that i love so much...it's a new love in my life ...i had almost given up on love when he walked through the door of my heart... Huggs!!! ------------------ Paula Diane S. |
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freespiritfem Junior Member
since 1999-10-07
Posts 49Cordova,Alabama,USA |
thanks everyone for the warm welcome..this place is very addictive....i love it here!!! |
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detroit_jb New Member
since 1999-10-21
Posts 1waterford,mi,usa |
keep writing you have a talent for putting your emotions down on paper and giving your readers a window into your heart |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Freespirit, Welcome aboard, enjoyed the read. |
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charamyst New Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 6 |
by far this is my favorite one you have written (that ive read) i especially like the intro but the whole poem is good. keep up the good work. P.s. please dont judge my work to harshly its been yrs since ive picked up a pen to describe feelings, emotions, ect. |
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Roger Leewright Junior Member
since 1999-09-25
Posts 28Beaverton, OR.USA |
Great first time.. loved the poem..please post more...Welcome aboard Roger Leewright |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very nice |
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