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Waves of Emotions

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freespiritfem
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since 10-07-1999
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0 posted 10-07-1999 03:10 PM       View Profile for freespiritfem   Email freespiritfem   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for freespiritfem


Waves of emotions, over me
they flow,
Bathing in the warmth of my
feelngs as they grow.
Alive,my skin, so sensitive to their touch,
Wanting and needing to experience them so much.

Always on my mind when we are apart,
Longing "Desperately" to touch your heart.
Memories of "US" invading my minds space,
Forever living in thatvery "Special" place.

You have made me feel the passion,joy,and pleasure,
In words alone,My love for you can not be measured.
Piching Myselfand asking,"Is this a dream or is it Real?",
Knowing these are feelings of love,that only true lovers could possibly feel.

"My Love",You are like a deep craving hunger,
Knowing I can not live without you for very much longer.
Desires I have for "YOU"can not be satisfied,
Only being in "YOUR" arms could they start to be gratified.

As i close my eyes you are here,
My bright and shinning star so near.
Just to touch your face,kiss your lips,and hold you tight,
Only then will everything feel so perfect and right.

Loving you...my Darlin...always and forever,so passionately,
Wanting and needing "YOU" so desperately.
Myfeelings of love for you...will keep on growing,
As waves of emotions keep on flowing.

1999 Paula Diane S.

This is the first time I have ever posted and the firsttime i have let anyone read anything have written, i was just scared to let anyone to see my inner emotions, but thanks to Ron, he has gave me the lil ush I've neede...so Thanks Ron..your a Great person!!!!!

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Paula Diane S.
© Copyright 1999 Paula D. Stone - All Rights Reserved
Ron
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1 posted 10-07-1999 03:35 PM       View Profile for Ron   Email Ron   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ron's Home Page   View IP for Ron

See, I told it wasn't so tough! I'm sure everyone here will give you a warm welcome, too.

And the poem is a good one, very heartfelt. Indeed, I know we've all felt that way a time or two (some around here more recently than others )

Welcome aboard, Paula!



[This message has been edited by Ron (edited 10-07-1999).]
Iloveit
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since 09-02-99
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2 posted 10-07-1999 03:44 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

yep, liked it very much, hope you like it here and post more, I am fairly new too, and just love it here
Julie
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3 posted 10-07-1999 03:50 PM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julie

I especially liked "you are like a deep craving hunger", it made me feel the deep
desire...nice work.

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Julie
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Thou who has given so much to me,
give one thing more: a grateful heart.
>George Herbert



Tara Simms
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4 posted 10-07-1999 04:03 PM       View Profile for Tara Simms   Email Tara Simms   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tara Simms's Home Page   View IP for Tara Simms

"As waves of emotions keep on flowing"--perfect! As Ron said, some of us are feeling this now. :-)


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It matters not how strait the gate;
How charged with punishments the scroll;
I am the master of my fate:
I am the captain of my soul.
--W.E. Henley
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Lucie
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since 06-20-99
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5 posted 10-07-1999 04:17 PM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucie

This is a nice poem.. I hope to see more posts from you in the future.. welcome to our home!

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Not all poems I write are about me personally, yet they do come from MY soul.
freespiritfem
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6 posted 10-07-1999 04:45 PM       View Profile for freespiritfem   Email freespiritfem   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for freespiritfem

tank you all for making me fell at home...i've neede a place where i could fit in and just be "myself"
Thank you again
huggs!

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Paula Diane S.
RainbowGirl
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7 posted 10-07-1999 05:35 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

You've found the right place...

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

freespiritfem
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Cordova,Alabama,USA


8 posted 10-07-1999 07:08 PM       View Profile for freespiritfem   Email freespiritfem   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for freespiritfem

I feel so much love from you all,
such kind and thoughtful people..
It's nice to be able to feel other ppls. emotions,to see into the windows of others souls...i've been alone too long i no longer feel,
like i'm the only person inthe world....thank you all for your lovely,emotional, and heartfelt words!!!
Nan
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9 posted 10-07-1999 08:28 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

I'm very pleased to welcome another new poet to our passionate family. I could certainly feel the "Waves of Emotion" in this work. I look forward to reading more from you. Keep 'em coming, Paula...

Nancy
Denise
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10 posted 10-07-1999 08:52 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very, very well done! I enjoyed reading this and I'm glad that Ron persuaded you to post it!

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Denise
Alwye
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In the space between moments


11 posted 10-07-1999 09:22 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Heartfelt, beautiful work. Welcome to our Passions family.

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*Krista Knutson*

Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller


Isis
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12 posted 10-07-1999 09:26 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Beautiful, nothing to be shy about here is there? Looking forward to seeing more of your work soon. And welcome to Passions

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How long after you are gone will ripples remain as evidence that you were cast into the pool?
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


freespiritfem
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Cordova,Alabama,USA


13 posted 10-08-1999 12:58 AM       View Profile for freespiritfem   Email freespiritfem   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for freespiritfem

I just want to thank you all for making me feel welcomed and for your all your sweet comments....i just hate that i didnt find this place sooner, and that i waited for years for someone else to read my written thoughts!!! You Guys are the BEST!!!!

HUGGSSSS!!!!!

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Paula Diane S.
A Romantic Heart
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since 09-03-99
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Forever In Your Heart


14 posted 10-08-1999 03:07 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Nicely done,Great poem....welcome to Passions..keep them coming!
Jucco
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since 10-08-1999
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15 posted 10-08-1999 09:03 PM       View Profile for Jucco   Email Jucco   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Jucco

If your writing this about someone you love,i can see the truly deep feelings you have for him,also,i love how you ended it to, i'm new here to, keep posting...your doing a great job!!!

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Lee D.
freespiritfem
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Cordova,Alabama,USA


16 posted 10-08-1999 09:23 PM       View Profile for freespiritfem   Email freespiritfem   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for freespiritfem

thank you lee,yes this is about a very "SPECIAL MAN' that i love so much...it's a new love in my life ...i had almost given up on love when he walked through the door of my heart...

Huggs!!!

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Paula Diane S.
freespiritfem
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17 posted 10-12-1999 04:06 PM       View Profile for freespiritfem   Email freespiritfem   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for freespiritfem

thanks everyone for the warm welcome..this place is very addictive....i love it here!!!
detroit_jb
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since 10-21-1999
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18 posted 10-21-1999 08:55 AM       View Profile for detroit_jb   Email detroit_jb   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for detroit_jb

keep writing you have a talent for putting your emotions down on paper and giving your readers a window into your heart
Seymour Tabin
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19 posted 10-21-1999 09:41 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Freespirit,
Welcome aboard, enjoyed the read.
charamyst
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since 10-27-1999
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20 posted 10-27-1999 07:14 PM       View Profile for charamyst   Email charamyst   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for charamyst

by far this is my favorite one you have written (that ive read) i especially like the intro but the whole poem is good. keep up the good work. P.s. please dont judge my work to harshly its been yrs since ive picked up a pen to describe feelings, emotions, ect.
Roger Leewright
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since 09-25-1999
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21 posted 10-27-1999 10:09 PM       View Profile for Roger Leewright   Email Roger Leewright   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Roger Leewright

Great first time.. loved the poem..please post more...Welcome aboard
Roger Leewright
passing shadows
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22 posted 05-16-2004 07:53 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

very nice
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