Point of Light - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Tara Simms
Senior Member

since 1999-08-12

Posts 1244
Honea Path, SC USA

0 posted 1999-10-07 08:30 AM

Point of Light

Be my guiding star, so bright
Showing me the way.
Be my north, my point of light
Lead me not astray.

Twinkle brightly, North star
Give me some direction.
Let me love you from afar,
I yearn for your affection.

Be my North Star, shining bright
For all the world to see.
Inspire me throughout the night
Take me through eternity.

Let me sit and languish
In the beauty of your glow.
Must I feel this anguish?
Why can’t I let you know?

I once wished upon a star,
Hoping dreams do come true.
Never dreamed it’d go so far.
My love, it brought me you.

------------------
It matters not how strait the gate;
How charged with punishments the scroll;
I am the master of my fate:
I am the captain of my soul.
--W.E. Henley
Visit my poetry website: www.geocities.com/Paris/Musee/9954/

moonmoon
Member

since 1999-08-13

Posts 277
TX , USA

1 posted 1999-10-07 09:09 AM

AWESOME, Tara...Sweet anticipation well sketched...Hope you and prince charming will soon blurt out to each other the way you feel for the other...

Here is to both of you...CHEERS..

Pepper
Member Elite

since 1999-08-19

Posts 3079
Southern Florida

2 posted 1999-10-07 10:44 AM

so lovely Tara.....

------------------

May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

3 posted 1999-10-07 10:55 AM

Very good my friend.

------------------
Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

4 posted 1999-10-07 07:06 PM

Ah Tara, I can sense the longing in this one...nicely done. I hope your star falls to your corner of the world real soon.
Hugs

Ruth

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

5 posted 1999-10-07 07:40 PM

Tara, this is such a lovely poem! I'm going to stand outside tonight and hope I can find a point of light...

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

6 posted 1999-10-07 08:17 PM

Beautiful, Tara!

------------------
Denise

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

7 posted 1999-10-07 08:18 PM

Echoing sentiments of all of the above!

------------------
...he knows the needs of my passions, he sates the searching of my soul...

caroline
Senior Member

since 1999-08-16

Posts 1218
http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm

8 posted 1999-10-07 08:20 PM

This shines like a star, Tara

------------------
"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats

Tara Simms
Senior Member

since 1999-08-12

Posts 1244
Honea Path, SC USA

9 posted 1999-10-10 10:02 PM

Thank you, everyone, for your comments! Moonmoon, Prince Charming (as you call him) loves reading your comments to me over the phone. I think he can feel me blushing!

------------------
It matters not how strait the gate;
How charged with punishments the scroll;
I am the master of my fate:
I am the captain of my soul.
--W.E. Henley
Visit my poetry website: www.geocities.com/Paris/Musee/9954/

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.