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Point of Light

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Tara Simms
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Honea Path, SC USA


0 posted 10-07-1999 08:30 AM       View Profile for Tara Simms   Email Tara Simms   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Tara Simms's Home Page   View IP for Tara Simms

Point of Light

Be my guiding star, so bright
Showing me the way.
Be my north, my point of light
Lead me not astray.

Twinkle brightly, North star
Give me some direction.
Let me love you from afar,
I yearn for your affection.

Be my North Star, shining bright
For all the world to see.
Inspire me throughout the night
Take me through eternity.

Let me sit and languish
In the beauty of your glow.
Must I feel this anguish?
Why canít I let you know?

I once wished upon a star,
Hoping dreams do come true.
Never dreamed itíd go so far.
My love, it brought me you.



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It matters not how strait the gate;
How charged with punishments the scroll;
I am the master of my fate:
I am the captain of my soul.
--W.E. Henley
Visit my poetry website: www.geocities.com/Paris/Musee/9954/


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moonmoon
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1 posted 10-07-1999 09:09 AM       View Profile for moonmoon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for moonmoon

AWESOME, Tara...Sweet anticipation well sketched...Hope you and prince charming will soon blurt out to each other the way you feel for the other...

Here is to both of you...CHEERS..
Pepper
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2 posted 10-07-1999 10:44 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

so lovely Tara.....

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
DreamEvil
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3 posted 10-07-1999 10:55 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Very good my friend.

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 10-07-1999 07:06 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Ah Tara, I can sense the longing in this one...nicely done. I hope your star falls to your corner of the world real soon.
Hugs
Ruth
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5 posted 10-07-1999 07:40 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Tara, this is such a lovely poem! I'm going to stand outside tonight and hope I can find a point of light...
Denise
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6 posted 10-07-1999 08:17 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Beautiful, Tara!

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Denise
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7 posted 10-07-1999 08:18 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Echoing sentiments of all of the above!

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...he knows the needs of my passions, he sates the searching of my soul...
caroline
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8 posted 10-07-1999 08:20 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

This shines like a star, Tara

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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats
Tara Simms
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Honea Path, SC USA


9 posted 10-10-1999 10:02 PM       View Profile for Tara Simms   Email Tara Simms   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tara Simms's Home Page   View IP for Tara Simms

Thank you, everyone, for your comments! Moonmoon, Prince Charming (as you call him) loves reading your comments to me over the phone. I think he can feel me blushing!

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It matters not how strait the gate;
How charged with punishments the scroll;
I am the master of my fate:
I am the captain of my soul.
--W.E. Henley
Visit my poetry website: www.geocities.com/Paris/Musee/9954/


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