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Eternally Spring(Challenge from DreamEvil)

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Systematic Decay
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0 posted 10-07-1999 03:34 AM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Systematic Decay

I walk this path of sunny springtime joy
I gaze on red roses fully in bloom
You are the hope my heart needs to employ
You are sweeter than this garden's perfume

Larger than life my love for you does loom
Often I wonder why you wanted me
I just could never in my life assume
That my bitter honey could lure a bee

Though I once thought it simply couldn't be
I need only to look into your eyes
I ran away to you, now I am free
You are the sugar that sweetens the lies

You are the world where my fancies take wing
When I'm with you it's eternally spring


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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-
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DreamEvil
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1 posted 10-07-1999 03:37 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Excellent Spenserian sonnet my dear. See, you can write sappy all the way through, if you try. Challenge well met.

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
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2 posted 10-07-1999 03:41 AM       View Profile for Dragoness   Email Dragoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dragoness's Home Page   View IP for Dragoness

Simply lovely.Liked this one a lot!

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.

Pepper
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3 posted 10-07-1999 10:53 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

enjoyed this much SD.......

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 10-07-1999 07:10 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Oh, I did like this one, not your usual
caroline
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5 posted 10-07-1999 09:07 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

A challenge well met, SD
You're real good at "sappy" ~LOL~

I liked this a lot!

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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats
Lynn
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6 posted 10-07-1999 09:10 PM       View Profile for Lynn   Email Lynn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lynn


Very Beautiful. I loved it....!
suicidal dreams
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7 posted 10-07-1999 09:18 PM       View Profile for suicidal dreams   Email suicidal dreams   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suicidal dreams

liked the poem but content depressed me(sorry )

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life is short kill quick
Denise
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8 posted 10-07-1999 10:19 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I liked this too, SD. Very well written!
 
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