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old poem that has rhyme and meter?????
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old poem that has rhyme and meter????? |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL 
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Daydreaming I go to my room and slouch in the chair and lock my eyes in that familiar stare then before you know it...I'm high as the sky floating on clouds my daydream and I. I've traveled through space to visit the moon so please don't rouse me, I'll be coming home soon just after I capture an alien or two daydreaming is such a fun thing to do. I can't resist a daydream's siren call to travel somewhere and not be there at all but only when I'm gone things never get done that's when coming back home isn't much fun. Is daydreaming just for those who are young and when you reach thirty has your song been sung ? Nah !! When things get crowded and everyone's there I'll go to my room and slouch in the chair. RB ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Rhyme and meter, true...and I love daydreams too!  ------------------ Denise |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
I have created in my mind so many different lives. I can pick and choose which I would like to travel to on any given day. The thing I have mastered is daydreaming while doing the dishes and the floors. My hands are not idle while my mind flies. Great job friend. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
UP,UP,UP!! ------------------ Denise |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Denise..... :-} ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
I love daydreaming too...to get lost in my own little world. ------------------ "Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage." -Billy Corgan- |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
Rhyme and meter or not...it's all creative and always an enjoyable read. ------------------ Julie ------------------------- Thou who has given so much to me, give one thing more: a grateful heart. >George Herbert |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
It does have rhyme......and is enjoyable to read. |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
What a day for a daydream...... |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Ahh, Daydreaming ! My favourite means of passing the time. Hmm, maybe that's why my house is such a mess ? : ) |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
ahhh munda....a daydreamer after my own heart! ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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