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HM3
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0 posted 10-06-1999 10:26 PM       View Profile for HM3   Email HM3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for HM3

Growing pains
Broken chains
A sad melody

Falling tears
Listening ears
A friend just for me

Reaching out
Sharing doubt
When life gets me down

Hands to clutch
Gentle touch
Can turn me around

Spoken words
Softly heard
Cognitivity

Holding tight
Loving light
Calm serenity

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Work like money doesn't matter, love like you've never been hurt, dance like nobody's watching...
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1 posted 10-06-1999 10:33 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Simple. Beautiful. Simply beautiful!

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Jessey
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2 posted 10-06-1999 10:34 PM       View Profile for Jessey   Email Jessey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jessey

This is a great poem...
hoot_owl_rn
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Oh, this is beautiful....I love the format you selected for this piece
Ohme
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HM3, this was too beautiful to let it go away. I brought it back so I could enjoy it again.
Watcher666
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Beautiful! Well done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
hoot_owl_rn
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I like the simplicity of this one, well done
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