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Choosing to Believe

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HM3
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0 posted 10-06-1999 10:23 PM       View Profile for HM3   Email HM3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for HM3

Don't bother calling you can't reach me by phone
If you drop by you'll find that nobody's home
I'm out chasing yesterdays, the way I used to be
Sharing and caring, choosing to believe

While I've been out running, you're every where I go
I've seen you so many places but you don't even know
I'm trying to find it, the me I want to be
Sharing and caring, choosing to believe

Looking through those yesterdays, one memory at a time
I don't find why I love you, the reason or the rhyme
So I dig my garden and hope to sow the seed
Sharing and caring, choosing to believe

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Work like money doesn't matter, love like you've never been hurt, dance like nobody's watching...
© Copyright 1999 Wanda Ozee - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 10-06-1999 11:08 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very nice, 'sharing and caring, choosing to believe'. I like how you repeat that line!

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Denise
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2 posted 10-07-1999 02:21 PM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

Well, I liked it, though a bit vague,,,,,,choosing to believe in what?

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-
Dragoness
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3 posted 10-07-1999 02:30 PM       View Profile for Dragoness   Email Dragoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dragoness's Home Page   View IP for Dragoness

Keep believing! Lovely poem.

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.

Iloveit
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4 posted 10-07-1999 02:34 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

well I agree, it leaves a few questions, but overall, I like the sentiment
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5 posted 10-07-1999 04:37 PM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julie

I like the message here. Searching for the best we can be.

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Julie
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Thou who has given so much to me,
give one thing more: a grateful heart.
>George Herbert



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6 posted 10-07-1999 05:41 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

I like you choice in beliefs..

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

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