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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
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0 posted 1999-10-06 06:50 PM


I just hope when my time on this plain is over,
All who knew me would say,
The world will now be a lesser place,
Without her truly loving and caring ways.
She will be missed but not forgotten...

It's not glorious, or comments that would make it all seem worthwhile, if I have just this said of me, I'd be happy..


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What lies behind us and what lies before us are tiny, compared to what lies within us.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


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Denise
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1 posted 1999-10-06 10:01 PM


'Tis all any of us can hope...to be remembered and missed. Well stated, Isis.

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Denise

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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2 posted 1999-10-06 11:01 PM


Isis...what more can anyone ask for
Isis
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since 1999-09-06
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Sunny Queensland
3 posted 1999-10-07 12:05 PM


Thanks Hoot and Denise. What I mean though if for that comment to come from others besides my family..

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What lies behind us and what lies before us are tiny, compared to what lies within us.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
4 posted 1999-10-07 12:05 PM


Thanks Hoot and Denise. What I mean though if for that comment to come from others besides my family..

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What lies behind us and what lies before us are tiny, compared to what lies within us.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


RainbowGirl
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since 1999-07-31
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United Kingdom
5 posted 1999-10-09 05:45 AM


Isis: Well said..:-)

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


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