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Alicat
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0 posted 10-06-1999 04:00 PM       View Profile for Alicat   Email Alicat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Alicat

My Love, I know thy love for me
From cistern deep it flows freely
Do draw closer to my side
And I will have you as my bride

How long ago did you and me
Share secret words of poetry
From shyest quip to longest line
I knew not then that you'd be mine

How long it seemed for trust to be
Established betwixt you and me
We came to know our souls' delight
Our fears, our loves, our days, our nights

Now, at last, we love have found
But our voices voice no sound
For our heart-beats side by side
Thrill that you wouldst be my bride


Alicat, the twitterpated satiated kilted kitty
© Copyright 1999 Alastair Adamson - All Rights Reserved
Nicole
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1 posted 10-06-1999 04:02 PM       View Profile for Nicole   Email Nicole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nicole

Oh this makes me smile...

You dear, will get a more in depth reply in private.
Pepper
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this is lovely Alicat......

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
Denise
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3 posted 10-09-1999 02:05 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Beautiful! You two should have this printed for your wedding and given to all the guests!
What a lovely gift from one heart to another!

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Denise
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4 posted 10-09-1999 07:45 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Why, you romantic devil, Alicat. Well done, indeed! (Her love flowed from a cistern?Wow.)
Poet deVine
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5 posted 10-09-1999 11:23 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Such beautiful poetry must surely come from the heart of a poet in love! Very good!
hoot_owl_rn
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6 posted 10-10-1999 01:24 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Wow, you most certainly are bitten, smitten and in love
I like!!
Christopher
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7 posted 10-10-1999 01:39 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Well done indeed!

Condolences on the marraige Ali...LOL!
Nan
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Yep - This Alicat's got it bad...
U K Hero
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9 posted 10-10-1999 11:14 AM       View Profile for U K Hero   Email U K Hero   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for U K Hero

I have to admit you have a wonderful flow here that matches the words well.
Munda
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WOW number 20 !
 
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