When I'm Gone(Challenge by Isis)

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When I'm Gone(Challenge by Isis)

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

0 posted 1999-10-06 03:35 PM

I decided to answer Isis's challenge in Haiku form......

When I'm gone, just know
Even though I tried in vain
I truly did try

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 1999-10-06 04:07 PM

If you did try, then it was not in vain.

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

2 posted 1999-10-06 06:45 PM

So simple but so strong a message!!

Well done SD

I think my challenge might be too easy!!

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What lies behind us and what lies before us are tiny, compared to what lies within us.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

3 posted 1999-10-06 09:52 PM

Actually, Isis, it was quite thought provoking....I was originally planning something longer, but all I could come up with was this.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

4 posted 1999-10-06 11:10 PM

No trying is in vain...well stated

Dragoness
Senior Member

since 1999-08-07

Posts 513

5 posted 1999-10-07 04:16 AM

Well done!

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.

Pepper
Member Elite

since 1999-08-19

Posts 3079
Southern Florida

6 posted 1999-10-07 10:47 AM

yes, very well done SD......

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

suicidal dreams
Member

since 1999-09-28

Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA

7 posted 1999-10-07 09:36 PM

vain all things worth trying end vainly

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life is short kill quick

[This message has been edited by suicidal dreams (edited 10-07-1999).]

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