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Echo Rhayne
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since 09-17-99
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Canyon Country, CA

0 posted 10-06-1999 12:22 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Echo Rhayne

I can't move myself
I can't reach the door
I just sit in the corner
attached to the floor

The wall just ahead
is all I can see
little by little
it closes in on me

I sit and think
as my heart slows its pace
and more and more tears
just roll down my face

But why do I care?
And why do I cry?
I've always known
I deserve to die!

~*~ I write to know I am alive ~*~
© Copyright 1999 Echo Rhayne - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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since 07-07-99
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Tamarac Fla

1 posted 10-06-1999 01:04 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Good poem bad end. Very few deserve to die.
What horrific sin did you commit besides writting a bad end to a good poem. hehehe.
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2 posted 10-06-1999 01:08 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

My friend, I understand.

Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.

Richard 33
since 09-09-99
Posts 197
glen easton, wv usa

3 posted 10-06-1999 01:21 PM       View Profile for Richard 33   Email Richard 33   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Richard 33

No one deserves to die,we all as human
beings, have crosses to bear, at times in
the face of disaster, we must hold our heads up, and say, maybe I got knocked
down today, but as long as there is tomorrow, I can try again, and besides
how could someone as beautiful as you,
one who creates such beauty, deserve
to die. Please keep trying to turn the
destructive thoughts you have for yourself,
and use them as creative tools, as poets
it's our fuel, and our passion, you are far
too beautiful for this world to lose!!!
Poet deVine
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since 05-26-99
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Hurricane Alley

4 posted 10-06-1999 02:11 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Echo, your talent shows through in your work - as does your pain. But there is a wonderful world out there waiting for someone as young and bright and talented as you. Grab it! Live it! Enjoy it!
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5 posted 10-06-1999 03:04 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Echo, we talked earlier, and I'm so glad...I just want to say that I want to see you take a stand for YOU! You have to choose to be strong, and stand up & take control of what's going on - - We all have to find our own happiness - it doesn't just come to us...we have to go get it !! Don't lay down like a wounded animal and let death steal your future away...The same rules apply to us, as they do in nature. The strong survive, and the weak are eaten...Please stand up out of that corner, dust off all the pain & humiliation, and show yourself that you are a survivor ! I know you struggle to see the value in you - but let me tell is there. Don't let depression steal another day from you !!!! I am here to back you up & you are in my thoughts!! Lots of love to you....Gennifer

I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale

Systematic Decay
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since 09-15-99
Posts 1312
That place with padded walls a

6 posted 10-06-1999 03:16 PM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

Echo.....I know exactly how you feel....for I've done the same thing so many times....just hang in there, things will get better someday. They have to.....don't they?

"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-
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