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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 10-06-1999 11:04 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin


Done and undone Our life is like some spiders bed
Each day we thread another thread
And the ebb and flow takes its toll
With a laugh and tear from our soul.

The sun and the stars and the moon
From these things we are not immune,
We draw from them our stimulus
And pour from them our omnibus.

The web dissolves thread by thread
And the ebb carries away the dead
There is no stasis we can obtain
Nor a continuances of ordain.

In this process we live and die
And fuse again with earth and sky.
We meet the need of cede too seed,
With only wonder of the deed.

I understand my time and place
And do not fear the short embrace.
There is but one regret for me,
I will not see our legatee.
© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Echo Rhayne
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1 posted 10-06-1999 11:07 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

This is great! I like it very much. Good job!


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Pepper
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2 posted 10-06-1999 11:37 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

very interesting piece Sy.....thought provoking for sure.....enjoyed the read

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Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 10-06-1999 06:57 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Echo & Pepper,
Enjoyed your comments thanks for the read
sandgrain
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4 posted 10-06-1999 07:23 PM       View Profile for sandgrain   Email sandgrain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sandgrain

I like this type thinking put in verse.
Thanks for sharing!!
Denise
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5 posted 10-06-1999 08:14 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Excellent, Seymour!

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Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 10-06-1999 10:14 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Sand & Denice,
Your comments always bring a smile. Thank you
A Romantic Heart
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7 posted 10-07-1999 12:06 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

A very deep thought poem...which intrigues me...I like the ones that make me think and ponder! Powerful words!:*
Severn
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8 posted 10-07-1999 01:19 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

LIke the way you play with words, Seymour.
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9 posted 10-07-1999 08:52 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Wonderful commentary.
Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 10-07-1999 08:53 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Romantic & Severn,
Thank you for the read, commments and the boost. *L*
Nan
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...and life goes on - and on - and on -
Nice job, Sy...
Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 10-07-1999 06:29 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Nan,
So nice to have your comment. Ms Nightengale.
Andrew Scott
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13 posted 10-07-1999 07:41 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

And so it goes... but you said it all so well. I'll admit to having looked up "legatee." Thought it might be what it was, but just wasn't sure until I read it on the Web... Webster's Dictionary that is. Again, nice work... and thanks for sharing
Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 10-07-1999 10:54 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Scot,
Legatee, not exactly a poetic word but it worked.
Thanks for the read and comment.
 
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