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Roger Leewright
Junior Member
since 1999-09-25
Posts 28
Beaverton, OR.USA

0 posted 1999-10-06 10:42 AM


I dream of you, each and every night,
Filled with the warmth of your inner light.
You came into my life, if just for a few days,
And touched me in such unfamiliar ways.

I know it’s not the same for you,
Could you be attracted to these eyes of blue?
I know you think of me as just a friend.
But it’s passion I feel, I can not pretend.

I Fear from you only rejection,
From this, my heart, I hide for protection.
In dreams of you, my soul flies free,
Could you ever feel the same for me?

On the outside, I will try not to show,
The imprint, you have left on my soul.
The things I feel I want to explore,
If only you would open the door.

There's just something about you,
That I've never found before.
And now that we've become friends,
I want you even more.

I don’t want to destroy the life you know,
I would rather lie next to you in the afterglow,
It’s passion I wish to share with you.
And keep our secret, this is true.

So if you ever need some tenderness,
With a guy you can surrender with.
I will wait to see what you decide,
But always in my heart, you will reside.

Time will reveal what lies ahead,
But always remember the words I have said.
Now you know what I want to do,
Cause baby, "There’s just something about you".

© Copyright 1999 Roger Leewright - All Rights Reserved
Echo Rhayne
Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA
1 posted 1999-10-06 11:05 AM


This is very beautiful. Who ever it was written for is very lucky.


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~*~ I write to know I am alive ~*~

Dolphins3
Member
since 1999-09-30
Posts 135
Wisconsin
2 posted 1999-10-06 11:14 AM


Speachless. I know how you feel. Very beautifully written. I love it
Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
3 posted 1999-10-06 11:19 AM


You've done a good job on this Roger! I think if you showed the lady this, she'd melt into your arms..there's nothing better than a love poem to open a girl's eyes and heart!
Pepper
Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
4 posted 1999-10-06 11:22 AM


Oh I like this alot Roger......lucky girl indeed....

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

Dragoness
Senior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 513

5 posted 1999-10-06 11:42 AM


Some lucky lady! Nicely written.

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.


Deb Lynne
Member
since 1999-08-19
Posts 180
Where blue skies meet blue ocean
6 posted 1999-10-06 12:20 PM


Roger...this is gorgeous! Can't wait to read more!
Toerag
Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622
Ala bam a
7 posted 1999-10-06 03:32 PM


And you're looking for some of my talent? what? Are you nuts?...Geeesch....!!!! This is really good! I must admit I've never read any of your stuff before....and I would have to agree with Ms. deVine (that bitch! LOL), this is great my friend!!!
Pufalove
Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 119
Houston, Tx. USA
8 posted 1999-10-06 04:01 PM


Yes, this is very touching and comes from the heart. So reach out and touch her, show her your poem.

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O all ye powers that he implanted, Arise, keep silence no more; put forth the strength that he hath granted, your noblest work is to adore.


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