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Sunshine
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Poetic Haiku

They want stylish context and form
No matter substance
And therefore, missing the message.

6 October, 1999
İKRJ



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Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

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a poigniant piece......good work Sunshine.....

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
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Thank you Pepper...
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Sunshine,
Got the message, but an 8 5 8 haiku is new to me. What ever, I enjoyed the read.
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4 posted 10-06-1999 01:39 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine


Sy, is Haiku only supposed to be 7/5/7? I can adapt...

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i thought haiku was 5/7/5 i could be wrong
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6 posted 10-06-1999 03:41 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Help, we have a rampant Haiku running around. Which is correct, 7/5/7 or 5/7/5?
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