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Sunshine
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0 posted 1999-10-06 08:52 AM


Poetic Haiku

They want stylish context and form
No matter substance
And therefore, missing the message.

6 October, 1999
©KRJ



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Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow


© Copyright 1999 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Pepper
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1 posted 1999-10-06 10:05 AM


a poigniant piece......good work Sunshine.....

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

Sunshine
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2 posted 1999-10-06 12:15 PM


Thank you Pepper...
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3 posted 1999-10-06 01:08 PM


Sunshine,
Got the message, but an 8 5 8 haiku is new to me. What ever, I enjoyed the read.

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4 posted 1999-10-06 01:39 PM



Sy, is Haiku only supposed to be 7/5/7? I can adapt...

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 10-06-1999).]

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5 posted 1999-10-06 03:38 PM


i thought haiku was 5/7/5 i could be wrong
Sunshine
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6 posted 1999-10-06 03:41 PM


Help, we have a rampant Haiku running around. Which is correct, 7/5/7 or 5/7/5?
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