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Why Doesn't My Bird Sing Anymore?

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Toerag
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25 posted 10-06-1999 02:46 PM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

But we love ya Ms. deVine....really we do...in fact, why don't ya let us show you? Okay, okay, I'll behave...as I always do, but believe me when I say, we do love you.....
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26 posted 10-06-1999 02:52 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Talk about some serious back peddlin'... I think LJA just went negative MPH.
True you guys are funny, but ya'll be skirtin' the edge of the forum envelope. See here, be careful where ya lick or ya'll get more than a paper cut.

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Poet deVine
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27 posted 10-06-1999 03:00 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

All this proves gentlemen is that I WIN!!!!!!

(laughing hysterically! do you think me so easily offended!! LOL....hehehehehehe... gotcha!)
Pufalove
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28 posted 10-06-1999 03:14 PM       View Profile for Pufalove   Email Pufalove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pufalove

On a note that's more serious(not easy for me)
This poem is quite good, don't you all see!
The boy had questions unanswered as he went on his way
In his mind he made the bird a toy so he could make it through the day!


Very well written, Toe.


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O all ye powers that he implanted, Arise, keep silence no more; put forth the strength that he hath granted, your noblest work is to adore.



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Toerag
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29 posted 10-06-1999 03:22 PM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Oh dear Ms. deVine,
One battle does not win the war,
I tried to write this seriously,
Till you tried to make it more.
but if you insist on this little conflict,
To make it a war of words,
I'll eat ya up and spit ya out,
Okay, so I might swallow cuz you're so dear!
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30 posted 10-06-1999 03:37 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

The poem is a gem that started my day with a smile... the responses have kept that smile glued on my face... Kudos to a backpedaling LJA, a gloating gleeful PDV... and a Toerag ready for any eating challenge!
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31 posted 10-06-1999 06:42 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

My response, Mr. Toe
is in the Adult place here
so if you dare, if you care
better tremble now in fear!


Lorelei54
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32 posted 10-06-1999 07:14 PM       View Profile for Lorelei54   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lorelei54

It seem LJA and Toe can turn even the most inncoent of things into something that makes us think. Hard to believe i live with one on them day in and out, as I am not like that! <eg>
Great ditty Toe!!!
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33 posted 10-06-1999 09:54 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Great poem, Mr. Toe! Hillarious replies everyone!

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Denise
 
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