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Windswept Girl

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Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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0 posted 10-06-1999 01:59 AM       View Profile for Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Email Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Rosemary J. Gwaltney's Home Page   View IP for Rosemary J. Gwaltney


Windswept girl shes a star-crossed lover<BR>
Fragile and fragrant and running for cover;<BR>
Tucking those sudden tears out of sight<BR>
She wont bring you down on this sweet night.<BR>
~ ~ ~<BR>
Dreamer sweet, shes light on her feet,<BR>
Dancing through dazes of loves complete;<BR>
Hush now dont wake her until the dawn,<BR>
When again shell behold the lives that are gone.<BR>
~ ~ ~<BR>
Shes an offspring of mine like my poetry<BR>
And Im tender toward that child who was me.<BR>
Cradle her gently, shes frail and small,<BR>
And please, if she trips, would you break her fall?

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...Living is ever like crossing rivers; finding a new life on each shore ... RJG
© Copyright 1999 Rosemary J. Gwaltney - All Rights Reserved
Echo Rhayne
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1 posted 10-06-1999 02:52 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Thats beautiful!

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~*~ I write to know I am alive ~*~


[This message has been edited by Echo Rhayne (edited 10-06-1999).]
U K Hero
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2 posted 10-06-1999 06:16 AM       View Profile for U K Hero   Email U K Hero   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for U K Hero

excellent, more please Rosemary.
IsabelleSkye
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3 posted 10-06-1999 08:54 AM       View Profile for IsabelleSkye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for IsabelleSkye

I thought this poem flowed really well. Thanks for posting it, I enjoyed it thoroughly!
I.Skye
hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 10-06-1999 09:34 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

I have to agree, the flow in this one is excellent...looking forward to more
Sunshine
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5 posted 10-06-1999 09:36 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Your other self. How fragile. Well done.
Pepper
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6 posted 10-06-1999 10:22 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

wonderful

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
Iloveit
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7 posted 10-06-1999 10:53 AM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

yes liked this very much
LngJhnAg
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8 posted 10-06-1999 11:12 AM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Rosemary - this poem was really neat - well versed and flowing smoothly from start to end. The only problem I have with it is that any mention of wind just makes Toerag more windie - If he reads this poem we'll all be in for a long day of his windiness - lol.
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9 posted 10-06-1999 12:07 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Welcome back, Rosemary. I've missed your wonderful poetry.
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