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'No More To Say?'

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Denise
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0 posted 10-05-1999 11:25 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Denise

Sweet lyrics lilting hide again
As fervent feelings churn within
Locution's lost - to my chagrin
-What use is paper and my pen?

A mighty torrent swells inside
As swirling passions burning rise
No finer time - some would surmise
-Would flowing verse seek now to hide?

Hid quite complete - to my dismay
And frenzied search proves only vain
What profit they - to cause such pain
-To chide me with...'no more to say?'

This poet's heart shall not know rest
'Till inspiration picturesque
Returns to paper on my desk
-This scribbling scribe 'till then's oppressed.

A word steps forth - then's fastly gone
But muse I will - however long
'Till wrested words play me their song
-For golden glows creation's dawn.


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Denise

[This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 10-06-1999).]

[This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 10-06-1999).]
© Copyright 1999 Denise - All Rights Reserved
Sally S.
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1 posted 10-05-1999 11:32 PM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

Well, Denise...I must say that I'd gladly get a case of writer's block if this were the end result. This is.....(how many adjectives are available?) brilliant, beautiful.... You know what I mean. I really like this poem yanno?

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"To waken doubt in one
Holding so fast by thine infinity;
So surely anchored on
The steadfast rock of immortality." ...Emily Bronte, "Last Lines"
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2 posted 10-05-1999 11:41 PM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucie

did you ever notice that when a poet has writer's block they always write a poem about writer's block.. and its always really good..hahahhaha
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3 posted 10-06-1999 12:10 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thank you for your oh so kind comments!

Lucie, yea, I guess it's survival of some kind! (hehehehehe)

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Denise
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4 posted 10-06-1999 01:14 AM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

You don't seem to have a writer's block to me either
I wish my writer's block was overcome as easily and fluently as yours!!
Good one as always Denise..

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What lies behind us and what lies before us are tiny, compared to what lies within us.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

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5 posted 10-06-1999 07:08 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thank you, Isis! I'm glad you liked it!
(it wasn't easy, though)

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6 posted 10-06-1999 08:10 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Denice,
Enjoyed the piece but the last stanza was great. Nice one.
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7 posted 10-06-1999 09:44 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Excellent!!
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8 posted 10-06-1999 09:58 AM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

will ditto all of the above...really excellent!
Echo Rhayne
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9 posted 10-06-1999 11:16 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

As my name I will echo the above statements. This is excellent!


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10 posted 10-06-1999 07:23 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Seymour, Hoot, lloveit and Echo, thank you all so kindly for reading and commenting! It is appreciated!

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Denise
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11 posted 10-06-1999 09:41 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Denise...I wish I could do this when I DON'T have writer's block!! Very nicely done!

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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats
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12 posted 10-06-1999 09:50 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thanks, Caroline. Glad you liked it!

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Denise
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Denise....ummm...will have to ditto friend. Don't fret too much....soon the words will be flowing so freely that your pen will run out of ink.....
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14 posted 10-06-1999 10:49 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thank you so much, Marilyn for reading and commenting. I wish that would happen to me!
They have never come easy...yet!

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Denise
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15 posted 10-06-1999 11:21 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

No more to say-yeah, I know the feeling...

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

"Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near..."

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16 posted 10-07-1999 01:24 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Well, I have to say - I don't really see any lack in your words here! Lovely work.

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Denise
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17 posted 10-07-1999 08:01 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thank you, Elizabeth and Severn, for reading and commenting! Elizabeth, it's a terrible feeling isn't it?

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Denise
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18 posted 10-08-1999 03:12 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

What else can I say! BEEN THERE DONE THAT!hehe Great poem!
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19 posted 10-08-1999 04:17 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thank you, Romantic Heart!

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Denise
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20 posted 10-23-1999 04:19 AM       View Profile for H. Arlequin   Email H. Arlequin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit H. Arlequin's Home Page   View IP for H. Arlequin

encore!!
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21 posted 10-23-1999 05:14 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Suffer from this malady often.Good read here!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
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22 posted 10-23-1999 04:03 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Why, thank you, HA and Watcher! So glad you liked it!

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Denise
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23 posted 10-23-1999 04:07 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Arrggghh--it's awful! (especially when you feel it as often as I do!)

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

"Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near..."

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24 posted 10-23-1999 04:27 PM       View Profile for darksideofthesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for darksideofthesun

wow- impressive!!read all your above kudos again and you'll know what i think also!-meg
 
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