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'No More To Say?'

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IsabelleSkye
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25 posted 10-23-1999 04:54 PM       View Profile for IsabelleSkye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for IsabelleSkye

Lovely use of descriptive words!
I was surprised by your above-average grasp of words (I had to double check to make sure I wasn't reading a poem of Nans)
Very nice!!!
Izzyy
PS I was NOT surprised that YOU wrote that way...just surprised thats all LOL
(can I stick my foot any further in my mouth??)

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"With love's light wings did I o'er-perch these walls; for stony limits cannot hold love out; and what love can do that dares love attempt." Romeo & Juliet Act II

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Denise
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26 posted 10-23-1999 05:21 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thank you, Elizabeth, Meg and Izzy. So glad you all liked it!

Elizabeth - I'm right there with 'ya! They come so few and far between, don't they? ARRRGGGGGG!!!!!!!

Izzy - I know what 'ya meant! And thank you for the compliment! You can compare me to Nan anytime you want! hehehehehehe

And Foot in Mouth and I are very close friends!

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Denise
Dr.Moose1
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27 posted 10-24-1999 09:52 AM       View Profile for Dr.Moose1   Email Dr.Moose1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dr.Moose1

Exquisitely descriptive , very enjoyable
Martie
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28 posted 10-24-1999 12:41 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

I love the way you write!

The words circle
Every minute has a poem
Someone will write it

Dreams in lose-leaf diaries
Stories on scratch paper
A thousand ways to slant
the meaning of a word

Catch one
The great white rectangle
awaits the muse
Denise
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29 posted 10-24-1999 02:03 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

DrMoose and Martie, thank you for your kind comments! And lovely poem, Martie!
And thank you too, Sys! (didn't want to bump this up again) Thank you too, Skyfyre! Thanks to you too, WhtDove!
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Denise


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Systematic Decay
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30 posted 10-24-1999 02:26 PM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

Denise, great poem, I've done that before, written a poem about writers block, but mine wasn't nearly as good as this one.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-
Skyfyre
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Sitting in Michael's Lap


31 posted 10-24-1999 05:12 PM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

You have doubtless broken through your block, and come through running. Well done, I say!

--Kess

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You cannot choose the way of your death, but the path you choose will determine its own end.
WhtDove
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32 posted 10-25-1999 02:17 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

My goodness, I missed this. I could have used it the other day too, as I had the same thing. But you wrote about it and I couldn't think of it. LOL...great job for one having writers block!
Rico
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33 posted 10-30-1999 11:04 AM       View Profile for Rico   Email Rico   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rico

Excellent I like your style and writer's grace not to step on your words. Awsome word choice!
Master
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35 posted 10-30-1999 03:32 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Enjoyed a lot, I've had a few of writers' blocks myself, (although not lately). Good description!
Denise
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36 posted 10-30-1999 05:39 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thanks to all of you for reading and commenting. It means so much to me that my fellow poets think my stuff is worth reading!


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Denise

RainbowGirl
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37 posted 10-30-1999 05:57 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

and thank you for posting back cause I missed it first time round and it's definitely worth reading..

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

Denise
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38 posted 10-30-1999 07:16 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thanks to you too, Rainbow! I'm so glad you liked it!

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Denise

 
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