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toocute4u_27
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My life was torn and shattered
I thought being with you was all that mattered
All my dreams where lost
I had to be with you at all cost
Slowly I broke away
Convincing my heart that it was better this way
Some nights the pain in my heart ached
I felt as though it might completely break
But as time went on I realized it was true
That time heals all wounds
And baby I'm over you
© Copyright 1999 Kerrie - All Rights Reserved
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Excellent! Very well done!

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You Go!! A very strong felt one here
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