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Master
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since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 1999-10-05 11:03 PM


Sorrow will perish, sadness will vanish
I found a reason to abandon my anguish
Strained to the limit, stretched to the border
As if a guitar string, I pull my aorta

Words fall on paper, like shadows on snow
The pen scratches pages as if with a claw
Fresh streaks and scars appear on my back
As time spins the hours on the face of the clock

While death sits beside me, silently waiting,
Somewhere inside me, new life is mating
Denser and deeper, locked in Love’s hands
I find the answers in what doesn’t make sense


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I fell in love and kept on falling

© Copyright 1999 Andrey Kneller - All Rights Reserved
JennyLee
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since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
1 posted 1999-10-05 11:30 PM


AMEN...

Jenny

Systematic Decay
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since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........
2 posted 1999-10-06 01:07 AM


Great poem, my friend

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
3 posted 1999-10-06 09:19 AM


I like it!!
Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
4 posted 1999-10-06 09:57 AM


great read......

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

Master
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since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867
Boston, MA
5 posted 1999-10-06 08:13 PM


Thank you all!
caroline
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since 1999-08-16
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6 posted 1999-10-06 08:18 PM


Master you have done it again
Excellent work!

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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats

Master
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since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867
Boston, MA
7 posted 1999-10-06 09:38 PM


Thanks Caroline!
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