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The Warning -or- My Mood Tonight

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Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration


0 posted 10-05-1999 10:11 PM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Christopher

The Warning


Withhold now your spite,
I can stomach no more.
Vile guilt you invite,
anger comes to the fore.

Always a lover,
now you burden with pain.
Go for the jugular,
ripping my soul again.

You mess with my mind,
vile mouth playing with words.
I do now in kind,
for my demons you've lured.

So ware now and ward,
a bitter heart's been scorned.
Come now, step forward,
knowing you have been warned.
© Copyright 1999 C.G. Ward - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 10-05-1999 10:33 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Wow! Very expressive. This is excellently done.

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Denise
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2 posted 10-05-1999 10:35 PM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

Great poem....had to read over it a couple times, I liked it a lot.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-
Michael
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3 posted 10-05-1999 10:48 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Eeks...(Tip Toing to the back of the room).
Think I'll sit silently here for a while.
Good poem Chris.

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Michael Anderson

When God puts a tear in your eye,
He puts a rainbow in your heart.


WhtDove
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4 posted 10-05-1999 10:53 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Strongly worded! Glad I didn't make you mad! You can feel the heat on this one!
Balladeer
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5 posted 10-05-1999 10:57 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Well, I know who I would like NOT to be! Well done!
RainbowGirl
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6 posted 10-05-1999 10:57 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Michael: I'm with you, as I go to hug my pillow and try to think calm, peaceful thoughts and wish the same here..:-)

HUSG Chris

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

Marilyn
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Forewarned she sits silently in the corner fearful of the slaughter.
Severn
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8 posted 10-05-1999 11:27 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Well, thank God I'm not the target of this!!!
Big mental hugs that I long to give in person
and a kick in the proverbial for 'her'.
hoot_owl_rn
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9 posted 10-06-1999 09:15 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Whew....very emotional and strong. This is quite well done Chris, I can feel the anger 3000 miles away
Pepper
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10 posted 10-06-1999 09:22 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

WOW.....hope you are feeling better today Chris......very well written....and you surely got your emotions across........

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
Poet deVine
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11 posted 10-06-1999 10:58 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Yikes! The poem is excellent..should I suck up a little more? Don't want you to be mad at me like this!!!!
Dragoness
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12 posted 10-06-1999 11:34 AM       View Profile for Dragoness   Email Dragoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dragoness's Home Page   View IP for Dragoness

Mind if I use this one Christopher?? I know a few who would benifit from it! Great poem!

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.

Christopher
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13 posted 10-06-1999 08:52 PM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher


Thanks friends.
Rough night last night, and needed some "therapy!"
caroline
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14 posted 10-06-1999 09:00 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Isn't it great to be able to write things out like this and feel better afterward? I do some of my best when I'm p'd off !

It's a grand poem, Christopher!

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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats
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