I'd hate to think the last line is how you truly feel...deep inside that part of you that you share w/no one. That part that is after-all a mix of light and dark. Words can be used as weapons,this is true,but words
from someone speaking from their soul should comfort you. You're poetry is great,there is no doubt,and no, I don't mean to spout my words to you. But, I bless thee Dream Evil,Most Gallant of poets with the gifts of dark and light,love and hate......and....
oh know.....Happiness and Peace...I bet you have some awesome love poetry buried in that
large heart of yours!!! As for this piece..
it is, as always a consummate work of art!
I pray That I don't offend thee....JennyLee