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DreamEvil
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0 posted 10-05-1999 09:11 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Twisted conscience has denied me true love.
Old nightmares have returned clothed in new flesh.
Life would be just had Noah killed the dove.
Desire and need will not ever mesh.

Away from my heart will I cast all doubt.
Love is the construct of a weakened mind.
Philosophy it seems has turned about.
To many things morality is blind.

Love is a lie born of lust and desire.
Hope is damnation for desperate fools.
Dreams cannot fulfill all that I require.
No longer will my words be woman's tools.


©1999 DreamEvil

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

© Copyright 1999 DreamEvil - All Rights Reserved
Sally S.
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1 posted 10-05-1999 09:16 PM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

sniffles ...Someone please cheer up Dream here!
JennyLee
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2 posted 10-05-1999 09:50 PM       View Profile for JennyLee   Email JennyLee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JennyLee

)~;
I'd hate to think the last line is how you truly feel...deep inside that part of you that you share w/no one. That part that is after-all a mix of light and dark. Words can be used as weapons,this is true,but words
from someone speaking from their soul should comfort you. You're poetry is great,there is no doubt,and no, I don't mean to spout my words to you. But, I bless thee Dream Evil,Most Gallant of poets with the gifts of dark and light,love and hate......and....
oh know.....Happiness and Peace...I bet you have some awesome love poetry buried in that
large heart of yours!!! As for this piece..
it is, as always a consummate work of art!

I pray That I don't offend thee....JennyLee
Systematic Decay
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3 posted 10-05-1999 09:58 PM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

Great poem as always.......

Though I know not what is bothering you, I hope that it is soon resolved.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-
caroline
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4 posted 10-05-1999 10:16 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

"Away from my heart I will cast all doubt"

I'll remember that line, Dream.

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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats
Marilyn
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5 posted 10-05-1999 10:52 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

As a friend most dear once said to me. Throw everything you have at me. The hurting words, the cruel remarks, all the pent up pain in your soul. In the end, when the dust settles, I will still be there at your side.
WhtDove
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6 posted 10-05-1999 10:59 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Hmmn, quite the change from the loving feelings you had! Hope your heart hasn't been broken.
DreamEvil
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7 posted 10-06-1999 04:32 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Sometimes we must let the Darkness shine.

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

Dragoness
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8 posted 10-06-1999 11:29 AM       View Profile for Dragoness   Email Dragoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dragoness's Home Page   View IP for Dragoness

Glad you don't see sisters as women! I'm always here brother of my heart.

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.

Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration


9 posted 10-06-1999 08:53 PM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

And I as well.
I must thank you for this poem, it certainly fit my mood last night.
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America the beautiful


10 posted 10-06-1999 11:16 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Another great one, DE...

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

"Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near..."

Ominous
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11 posted 10-06-1999 11:53 PM       View Profile for Ominous   Email Ominous   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ominous

*sniffles* how extremely sad. I'm sure that there is one woman out there that will never break your heart. I just hope that you find her.

What a fabulous poem Dream, sad yet still wonderful. You truly have the talent I have longed for all my life.

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Mysterious is the shadow, walking down the path of light

Sunshine
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12 posted 10-07-1999 03:47 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

And may Sunshine see into your shadows...
DreamEvil
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13 posted 10-07-1999 08:18 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

My bitterness is unbounded by anything save one voice. It overflows now and again into my writing. Thank you much, my fellow wordsmiths.

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©



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