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Dolphins3
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since 1999-09-30
Posts 135
Wisconsin

0 posted 1999-10-05 03:27 PM


Stiches into the quilt
Forever lasting through time
Imperfect to the quilter
Perfection to others
Heartache and pain
Happiness and joy
All sewn together
In time
Lasting through the years
Giving comfort and warmth
Only seeing the beauty
In the pattern choosen
Wondering who's initials
Appear on the back
The legacy left behind
Though all time
To keep the next generation warm.

© Copyright 1999 Cheryl Beth - All Rights Reserved
JennyLee
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since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
1 posted 1999-10-05 03:44 PM


This was so easy to read!!
Enjoyed very much

Jenny

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
2 posted 1999-10-06 08:55 AM


This was really quite beautiful....symbolism at it's best, the quilt standing for an actual quilt and the patchwork of our lives combined. Wonderful Job!!
Pepper
Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
3 posted 1999-10-06 10:03 AM


very lovely piece Dolphin......

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
4 posted 1999-10-06 02:17 PM


This is good, Dolphin. Enjoyed the read. Know about the [im]perfection of stitches comment...
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