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LngJhnAg
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Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion


0 posted 10-05-1999 02:41 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for LngJhnAg

Dear me, Poet Femme,
I thought you already knew,
The words you share with him,
Will only be a few.

You see, he's been ailing,
I think with appendicitis.
His memory is failing,
He's got laryngitis.

He's always gasping for breath,
His chest has been a wheezing.
He's isolated by bed rest.
Did I mention all his sneezing?

I'm sure you feel like singing,
As the talking time comes due.
But he may not hear you ringing,
An ear infection has run him through.

Do you hear the wedding bells?
They're tolling just in time.
He isn't in the best of health?
Relax. The operations went just fine.
© Copyright 1999 Michael Waterman - All Rights Reserved
suthern
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on the threshold of a dream


1 posted 10-05-1999 03:13 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

How reassuring! LOL.

Toe, sweets... I did not, repeat DID NOT spread these flu germs through cyberspace! LOL
JennyLee
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2 posted 10-05-1999 03:48 PM       View Profile for JennyLee   Email JennyLee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JennyLee

Very endearing words here!! LOL!

Jenny
Toerag
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Ala bam a


3 posted 10-05-1999 03:53 PM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

And now my two cents dear PoetFemme,
Now don't ya go worrying bout this certain him,
Let me offer ya reassurance,
He may have great insurance,
And though LongJohn may think he's ill,
He may have put ya in his will?
LngJhnAg
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Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion


4 posted 10-05-1999 03:59 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Hey there, ya scalawag. Great follow up - a good one-two punch if I ever saw one. Ol' gal Femme will be reeling with the blows now - heh heh heh
Toerag
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Ala bam a


5 posted 10-05-1999 04:10 PM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Hi ya LJA...love ya man....missed ya..hope things are going well for ya...
LngJhnAg
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Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion


6 posted 10-05-1999 04:15 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Hi ya, Toe - I'm getting in deep with my next project and have done a week's worth of reading and review in the past two days. Time for a break.

There's a sweet response for your poem on the Adult board - enjoy - lol
hoot_owl_rn
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Laughing
Michael
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8 posted 10-06-1999 01:20 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Long John,
I think you carried this way too far..I don't recall "sneezing" once! ROFL, thanks for such an ailing tribute.

------------------
Michael Anderson

When God puts a tear in your eye,
He puts a rainbow in your heart.




[This message has been edited by Michael (edited 10-06-1999).]
 
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