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You To Me ~And~ Me To You

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Lucie
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0 posted 10-05-1999 12:12 PM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lucie

Place your hands upon mine,
palm to palm and tip to tip.
Press your face up to mine,
nose to nose and lip to lip.
Press your body close to mine,
chest to chest and hip to hip.
Two hearts as one so sublime,
together journey through life’s trip.

Lets converge our agonies
heart to heart and soul to soul.
Lets combine our memories,
dream to dream and goal to goal.
Lets blend our energies
push to push and pull to pull.
Two hearts, one destiny
half to half and whole to whole.

You are the mirrored soul to me
you my moon and I your sun.
Two hearts, two souls, two beings
through love are joined as one.


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Not all poems I write are about me personally, yet they do come from MY soul.
© Copyright 1999 Lucille Dobbins - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


1 posted 10-05-1999 12:18 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

This is fantastic. It likes me a whole bunch! Well done, Lucie!
Lucie
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2 posted 10-05-1999 12:23 PM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucie

Thanks for the reply!
Sally S.
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3 posted 10-05-1999 12:24 PM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

this one simply brings a smile. Nice, Lucie.
Lucie
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4 posted 10-05-1999 12:29 PM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucie

Iloveit
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5 posted 10-05-1999 12:47 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

lucie this is beautiful, the perfect description of soul mates....
Pepper
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6 posted 10-05-1999 12:57 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

excellent Lucie......enjoyed this much

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
RainbowGirl
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7 posted 10-05-1999 12:57 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Lucie: Smiles here as well..

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

Lucie
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8 posted 10-05-1999 01:07 PM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucie

Thank you all for your replies..
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart


9 posted 10-06-1999 06:20 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

I LOVEed this one Lucie!
hoot_owl_rn
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10 posted 10-06-1999 09:39 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Beautiful!!
Dolphins3
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11 posted 10-06-1999 10:19 AM       View Profile for Dolphins3   Email Dolphins3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dolphins3

A perfect decription of soulmates. I loved it. )
LngJhnAg
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12 posted 10-06-1999 11:14 AM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Lucie

This poem has a great style - I loved the way you perfectly blended the form throughout the poem. You are really quite incredible - yanno that?
Pufalove
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13 posted 10-06-1999 05:28 PM       View Profile for Pufalove   Email Pufalove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pufalove

What a wonderful play with words. This would make a great song. It would be a best hit, just like this poem is!

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O all ye powers that he implanted, Arise, keep silence no more; put forth the strength that he hath granted, your noblest work is to adore.

Andrew Scott
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14 posted 10-06-1999 06:20 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Most Excellent Lady Lucie! Really liked the flow... kind of joyously skipping along. Also liked how everything matched up perfectly... don't think it could have been done better. Top shelf material for me!
Lucie
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15 posted 10-07-1999 01:20 AM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucie

Thank you all for your replies.. this poem likes me alot too..
Severn
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16 posted 10-07-1999 01:25 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Oh wow - love this. Close to home, it really is.
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