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What is the one thing you hope people remember about you - *challenge from Isis* |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom 
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When that time has come and gone when I can no more breathe you'll need to ask yourself whether I would also grieve? Look deep inside yourself maybe find a funny memory hear some laughter, see a smile and you just found a little part of me Don't forget the love I tried to give or all the hugs that I gave with all my heart or the life that made me want to live or even LJA who once called me a tart.(ROFL) What is the one thing you hope people remember about you after you die? to think of me as a kaleidoscope a rainbow who loved, laughed and cried.. ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I didn't see the challenge, but there is no mistaking the well-written response! Kudos, Rainbow! |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
you left me almost speechless on this one RG.......it is really excellent!....I just love this! and yes, it is *you*...perfectly! |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
this was beautiful, you should be proud. ------------------ "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
wow.....I too love this piece RG...... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I didn't see the challenge... but when I read your title, I thought HUGS, HUGS, and still more HUGS! *S* And Rainbows and Snoops... and a kind, loving heart in the dearest of friends... and then there's Wanton Hussy! LOL. Well done, RG... but plan on sticking around for a long time... 'kay? |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Queen Well, about that tart thingie - I was thinking of a cherry tart - so that's OK - right? This was an exceptionally good poem about a lady who has more class than any one person deserves. I'll never forget you, or the amazing amount of tenderness and caring you show to everybody. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I will listen to the melodious chords of Somewhere Over the Rainbow.....and smile, although you are one thing I would never get over. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Well done RG!!! Loved the answer, smart and true. That just reminds us all of what a special lady you are.. You blitzed it!!..::.. ------------------ What lies behind us and what lies before us are tiny, compared to what lies within us. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
It seems strange to be responding in the circumstances but just wait till it happens, and I'll come back and haunt you all with hugs, failing that, you'll see a rainbow but instead of it being an upturned mouth it will be upside down and therefore smiling...but I dread the thought that it might actually sing..  HUGS all ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
What can I say that the others haven't? Simply wonderful, Rainbow. (There, I said something different.  ) |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
The world would be a better place if we had more rainbows! This poem is you! As you know, life is short...how we live it is how we'll be remembered. You will be remembered with love and a smile! You give both equally - along with a liberal dose of hugs!  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Forget you, never!! Well done |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Rainbows are ribbons Of light fantastic Tied to the rain Before and after Bows in the morning Before Bows in the evening After Their beauty is only in color, Yours is more than the eye can see, Your heart though bodily covered, Has beauty that's beyond belief! (by the way, yanno, LongJohn may have just mis-typed that "tart" thinggie......Now what would be worse? A "Tart" or a "fart?"...Yassee, ya gotta look for the good in people....LOL...and you usually do! |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
HUGS ALL Toe: True, If it had been verbal I probably would have misheard and thought LJA said that anyway..:-) HUSG ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Pufalove Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 119Houston, Tx. USA |
And the rainbow's color would be brillant in hue, Just like the poetry that always comes from you! Very nice, Rainbow ------------------ O all ye powers that he implanted, Arise, keep silence no more; put forth the strength that he hath granted, your noblest work is to adore. |
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