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Nobody Knew????

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denny
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since 06-14-99
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Cincinnati,Ohio USA


0 posted 10-05-1999 09:44 AM       View Profile for denny   Email denny   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for denny


SHE CAME FROM A GOOD FAMILY
RAISED PROPER AND RIGHT
FOLLOWED ALL THE GOLDEN RULES
PRAYED TO GOD AT NIGHT
THEN ONE DAY SHE MET A BOY
AND QUICKLY FELL IN LOVE
SHE BELIEVED THAT HE WAS SENT
TO HER FROM HEAVEN ABOVE!!
IN ONE SHORT YEAR SHE BECAME A MOTHER AND A WIFE
BUT HER SWEET SMILE DISAPPEARED,
HE HAD CHANGED HER LIFE.

NOBODY KNEW HER SECRET
NOBODY FELT HER PAIN
NOBODY SAW THE BRUISES
SHE THOUGHT SHE"D GO INSANE!

ALL THE GOOD SHE SAW IN HIM
SUDDENLY TURNED TO BAD
SHE WOULD SUFFER FOR EVERTHING
IN THE WORLD THAT MADE HIM MAD!!!!!
BECAUSE OF LOVE FOR FAMILY
SHE WOULD TAKE ALL SHE COULD
HOPING THAT HE WOULD CHANGE
BECAUSE HE SAID "HE WOULD"
THEN ONE NIGHT HE WENT TO FAR
BUT HE REALLY NEVER MEANT TO
WHAT A PRICE SHE HAD TO PAY
JUST BECAUSE SHE LOVED YOU!!

NOBODY KNEW HER SECRET
NOBY KNEW HER PAIN
NOBODY SAW THE BRUISES
SHE THOUGHT SHE"D GO INSANE

WHEN ALL THINGS WERE SAID AND DONE
I HEARD PEOPLE SAY-----
THEY ALWAYS KNEW THAT THIS WOULD END
IN JUST THIS WAY!!!!

SHE THOUGHT THAT-------
NOBODY KNEW HER SECRET
NOBODY KNEW HER PAIN
NOBODY SAW THE BRUISES
WERE THEY ALL INSANE?????
© Copyright 1999 denny - All Rights Reserved
Dragoness
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since 08-07-99
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1 posted 10-05-1999 09:47 AM       View Profile for Dragoness   Email Dragoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dragoness's Home Page   View IP for Dragoness

Well written on a tough subject.We all need to speak up at the crime of abuse.

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.

hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
Posts 11105
Glen Hope, PA USA


2 posted 10-05-1999 09:50 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Denny...very tragic and sad, but in turn, very well written. It reads like lyrics, is it written as such? On more comment, after 1 1/2 years on the internet, I've come to see Caps as screaming or shouting...I sometimes have a very hard time reading a poem done in all caps for that reason. Let your words shout for themselves as they do so well in this particular piece.
Welcome to the group, looking forward to more.

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Man can not discover new oceans unless he has the courage to lose sight of the shore.
 
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