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hoot_owl_rn
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Point Of Impact

A simple word
A chance meeting
Two lost souls
In search of someone

Two people
So different, yet so alike
Two lives
Full of heartache
Brought together on one common ground

Like once distant stars
We now revolve
Around one sun
Space and time, no longer important

How or why it happened
I can not say
But I can still remember
The exact moment in time
Our two worlds collided


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Man can not discover new oceans unless he has the courage to lose sight of the shore.
© Copyright 1999 Ruth Kephart - All Rights Reserved
Lucie
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1 posted 10-05-1999 09:41 AM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucie

I like this.. sometimes its impossible to explain when or why.. but when it happens its a wonderful feeling.
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2 posted 10-05-1999 09:48 AM       View Profile for Dragoness   Email Dragoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dragoness's Home Page   View IP for Dragoness

Nicely done.Like star crossed lovers.*SIGH*

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.

Seymour Tabin
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Hoot,
Sun to sun,
That can be fun.
Enjoyed the read.
hoot_owl_rn
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Lucie, Dragoness and Seymore...thank you all for your comments
WhtDove
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Hoot I love how you worded this! As your two worlds collided. The only time we can say were happy about colliding with something! hehe .. great as always!
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hoot, - loved this, well done

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Tara Simms
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Ruth, I loved "the exact moment in time our two worlds collided"! That says it all.

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It matters not how strait the gate;
How charged with punishments the scroll;
I am the master of my fate:
I am the captain of my soul.
--W.E. Henley
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Balladeer
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Hoot, when two worlds collide, you don't planet! ** shamefully **
johnt300
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Ruth,
As every one else, loved the last stanza, too. Nice poem.
Tyson
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So romantic and beautiful! (did you do this one on your break too! ) So talented!

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Denise
RobertB
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very nice Ruth...did you ever read Worlds in Collision? I think that is the title.

RB

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.
hoot_owl_rn
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Thank you everyone

Robert...no I haven't heard of that one before
Christopher
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Beautiful Ruth, and I know exactly where you're coming from!
BTW- BAD BALLADEER! LOL
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hoot I'm in complete agreement with the others! Loved the last lines

And Balladeer...I'm in complete agreement with Christopher! LOL!! Ack!

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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats
hoot_owl_rn
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Laughing, thanks caroline and Chris
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