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Point Of Impact |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA 
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Point Of Impact A simple word A chance meeting Two lost souls In search of someone Two people So different, yet so alike Two lives Full of heartache Brought together on one common ground Like once distant stars We now revolve Around one sun Space and time, no longer important How or why it happened I can not say But I can still remember The exact moment in time Our two worlds collided ------------------ Man can not discover new oceans unless he has the courage to lose sight of the shore. |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
I like this.. sometimes its impossible to explain when or why.. but when it happens its a wonderful feeling.  |
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Dragoness Senior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 513 |
Nicely done.Like star crossed lovers.*SIGH* ------------------ Set you heart free and your mind will follow. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Hoot, Sun to sun, That can be fun. Enjoyed the read. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Lucie, Dragoness and Seymore...thank you all for your comments |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Hoot I love how you worded this! As your two worlds collided. The only time we can say were happy about colliding with something! hehe .. great as always! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
hoot, - loved this, well done ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Ruth, I loved "the exact moment in time our two worlds collided"! That says it all. ------------------ It matters not how strait the gate; How charged with punishments the scroll; I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul. --W.E. Henley Visit my poetry website: www.geocities.com/Paris/Musee/9954/ |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Hoot, when two worlds collide, you don't planet! ** shamefully ** |
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johnt300 Member
since 1999-09-12
Posts 214san diego, ca. |
Ruth, As every one else, loved the last stanza, too. Nice poem. Tyson |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
So romantic and beautiful! (did you do this one on your break too!  ) So talented! ------------------ Denise |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
very nice Ruth...did you ever read Worlds in Collision? I think that is the title. RB ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Thank you everyone Robert...no I haven't heard of that one before |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Beautiful Ruth, and I know exactly where you're coming from! BTW- BAD BALLADEER! LOL |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
hoot I'm in complete agreement with the others! Loved the last lines And Balladeer...I'm in complete agreement with Christopher! LOL!! Ack! ------------------ "Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Laughing, thanks caroline and Chris |
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