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Love is a river...

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Misty_Rain
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0 posted 10-05-1999 02:51 AM       View Profile for Misty_Rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Misty_Rain

Love is a river,
Mystical and free.
Overflowing with emotion,
Finding you and me.

Sometimes it runs fast,
Other times slow.
But no matter what happens,
It still comes and goes.
© Copyright 1999 Misty_Rain - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
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1 posted 10-05-1999 08:30 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Short and sweet..this sums up a lot

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Man can not discover new oceans unless he has the courage to lose sight of the shore.
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Here we have one big extended metaphor - starting with the title - which, by the way, made me open and read your poem... Nice job!! Keep 'em flowing...
 
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