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RobertB
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since 09-26-1999
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Champaign, IL


0 posted 10-04-1999 07:42 PM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for RobertB

October Feelings

If I could take
all the emotions
held in my heart
and give them all
the same name
it would have to be….

October

RB


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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.
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Denise
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1 posted 10-04-1999 08:12 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

AMEN!!

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Denise
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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2 posted 10-04-1999 10:04 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Nice

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Man can not discover new oceans unless he has the courage to lose sight of the shore.
Julie
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since 08-20-99
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3 posted 10-04-1999 10:10 PM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julie

Robert,
I like your style. Your are able to say
so much with such few words...me, well
I have to go on and on....and still not
sure if I got my thought across.
Do you understand? Are you getting this?...
"Just kidding". Nice job.
JennyLee
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since 09-01-99
Posts 1478
Northwestern, NJ.


4 posted 10-04-1999 10:13 PM       View Profile for JennyLee   Email JennyLee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JennyLee

My sentiments exactly!!!
Great as always!!!

Jenny
RobertB
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since 09-26-1999
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Champaign, IL


5 posted 10-04-1999 10:22 PM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RobertB

I understand perfectly Julie!! I just always said it short and sweet. I wish I had the patience to do a looooonnnngggggg poem!!

RB

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.
caroline
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6 posted 10-04-1999 10:37 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

I'm enjoying your work, Robert! This is lovely

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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats
Marilyn
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since 09-26-1999
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7 posted 10-04-1999 11:10 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

I have to apologize to you. I have been lax in reading and commenting on your work. I want to do so much and have so little time...LOL. I will echo the sediments of the others. Short and sweet but saying much. If you want a challenge....Try one of Nan's work shops. I am enjoying it very much. The challenge is great and I am learning so very much.

[This message has been edited by Marilyn (edited 10-04-1999).]
IsabelleSkye
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8 posted 10-04-1999 11:29 PM       View Profile for IsabelleSkye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for IsabelleSkye

Robert......
October is my favourite month! How well you expressed how I feel inside sometimes. And how this glorious month feels too!
I think I will have to delve into the archives a bit and see what other gems you have in store for me!
I.Skye
Systematic Decay
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since 09-15-99
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That place with padded walls a


9 posted 10-04-1999 11:33 PM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

Very interesting poem. I like.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-
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