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IsabelleSkye Member
since 1999-06-27
Posts 253 |
cold granite structure looming so grey and tall with circling stair before me a forboding seeps through me as the demons scream from the windowless tombs encased in these stone walls with ragged movement I surmount the stair each painful torturous step bringing me nearer to the one thing the one thing that gives me hope I hear your voice it calls to me come gathering my strength prevailing over enshrouding darkness I win the arduous flight to find myself warmed by your tender embrace |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
I have to think on this one..it makes me feel something. RB ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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IsabelleSkye Member
since 1999-06-27
Posts 253 |
Robert...making the reader feel something is exactly my goal. *happy sigh* Thanks! I.Skye |
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You just never seem to lose your touch with imagery, Izzy...  |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Indeed, Izzy, you paint a vivid image and draw on the readers emotions as well...very well done. ------------------ Michael Anderson When God puts a tear in your eye, He puts a rainbow in your heart. |
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