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Mike
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0 posted 10-04-1999 06:37 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Mike

My faith and trust are swept like straws,
From out my grasp by tempest's woe,
As I devour the bitter ash,
Of soul's despair of haunting sorrow.

Dank and gloomy mausoleum,
Erected by death's loathsome lust,
Man's unperverted ethereal mask,
Conventions are by evil crushed.

Shrouded chambers of formless haunts,
Recoil in horror as shadows bleed,
Clouds of terror reach fingers out,
Dark spirits stalk; hell hath decreed.

Wtih mournful soul and quivering limbs,
Am touched upon by lifeless breath,
Unrelenting desolation,
Stand face to face with sin and death.
© Copyright 1999 Mike - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 10-04-1999 08:06 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Mike, you have certainly depicted the emotions that death can bring to the ones left behind. And, once again, I must say I am in awe of your talent!

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Thank you for the comment Denise. Just a little experiment.
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An excellent experiment, I might add.
 
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