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Jim Raynor
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0 posted 10-04-1999 06:14 PM       View Profile for Jim Raynor   Email Jim Raynor   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Jim Raynor's Home Page   View IP for Jim Raynor

“Alone”
Do you know what it like to be alone?,
When every one in the world is with the person they love,
Every one but you,
Your just all alone no one to hold,
no one to talk to,
no one to tell “I love you” to,
no one to tell your problems to,
no one to tell you that your appreciated,
no one to show how much you love them,
no one’s hand to hold,
no one to stop you from doing something wrong,
no one to tell you that your loved,
no one to tell you that you have a reason to live,…
I know how it feels…
It feels like your life has drifted onto a deserted desert island,
It feels like you have no reason to live,
It feels like there is no one that loves you,
It feels like your heart was just taken and manipulated,
It’s feeling is indescribable by any word but I have known the feeling of being alone…
Because I am alone…,”

-Jim R.
P.S. its not always bad to be alone but in my case it is really bad
P.S.S. if any one knows a Deanna Merrill in Missouri A.K.A. Diona Merrill Please let me know.


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Love hurts when your flying solo. -Jim Raynor
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"Be Nice, Every one is fighting a tough war against them selves" - "John Wats" - Jim Raynor( at least i think John Wats Said that.
© Copyright 1999 Jim Raynor - All Rights Reserved
Rhiannon
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1 posted 10-04-1999 06:26 PM       View Profile for Rhiannon   Email Rhiannon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rhiannon's Home Page   View IP for Rhiannon

being alone is something we have all been through or will go through...i really like how that indescribable feeling can somehow be described...and in a very good way!

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The night is my companion
The solitude my guide
Would I spend forever here
And not be satisfied?
Sarah MacLachlan, "Possession"
Jim Raynor
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2 posted 10-04-1999 06:43 PM       View Profile for Jim Raynor   Email Jim Raynor   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Jim Raynor's Home Page   View IP for Jim Raynor

Thanks Rhiannon for your kind words and response

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Love hurts when your flying solo. -Jim Raynor
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"Be Nice, Every one is fighting a tough war against them selves" - "John Wats" - Jim Raynor( at least i think John Wats Said that.
Star Fairy 2
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3 posted 10-04-1999 06:55 PM       View Profile for Star Fairy 2   Email Star Fairy 2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Star Fairy 2

Being alone sucks

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"If to rectify your demeanor,
You must imitate another,
Your philosiphy on morality
Is a burden on your mentality,
Your actions based on popularity,
Will never fulfill you internally,
Cuz the world was not blessed with equality,
But rather with fake geniality.
--823--
Jim Raynor
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4 posted 10-04-1999 06:57 PM       View Profile for Jim Raynor   Email Jim Raynor   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Jim Raynor's Home Page   View IP for Jim Raynor

Star Fairy2 of course being alone sucks but not all the time of course, sometimes its better to be alone than to be with someone else, especially if that some one else has bad B.O. hehehe

-Jim Raynor

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Love hurts when your flying solo. -Jim Raynor
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"Be Nice, Every one is fighting a tough war against them selves" - "John Wats" - Jim Raynor( at least i think John Wats Said that.
hoot_owl_rn
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5 posted 10-04-1999 10:02 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

I see you have been practicing in your absence Sir. Jim...well done

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Man can not discover new oceans unless he has the courage to lose sight of the shore.
Pepper
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6 posted 10-05-1999 01:17 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

have been there too Jim.......loved the way you expressed it........

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
Starith
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7 posted 10-05-1999 09:29 PM       View Profile for Starith   Email Starith   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Starith

Jim I know what it feels like to be alone...it hurts so much at times...but life will get better. It seems to have a funny way of turning around just when you think it's not possible. I hope your life takes that turn soon!

Star

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We are only truly apperciated after we are no more!

Isis
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8 posted 10-06-1999 01:56 AM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

We have all been alone at some time and will be again. Great piece. Use the time is my advice, do the stuff you've never had time to before..and guess what else, you won't be alone for long...

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What lies behind us and what lies before us are tiny, compared to what lies within us.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

Poet deVine
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9 posted 10-06-1999 11:39 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

It's worse to be 'alone' in a relationship than just alone...the emptiness is greater then. I am alone now, but not as alone as I was when I was married! Good poem, Jim. Thought provoking.....
suthern
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10 posted 10-06-1999 11:42 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

I know all too well... but I do agree with PDV! *S*
toocute4u_27
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since 10-01-1999
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11 posted 10-09-1999 01:18 AM       View Profile for toocute4u_27   Email toocute4u_27   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit toocute4u_27's Home Page   View IP for toocute4u_27

Being alone is hard. But remember were never truly alone, God is always with us.
Pufalove
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12 posted 10-09-1999 01:39 AM       View Profile for Pufalove   Email Pufalove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pufalove

Very expressive, but ahhh Sir Jim, you are not alone........you have all of us!

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O all ye powers that he implanted, Arise, keep silence no more; put forth the strength that he hath granted, your noblest work is to adore.

 
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