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Tell Me, My Love

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Lynn
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0 posted 10-04-1999 06:12 PM       View Profile for Lynn   Email Lynn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lynn


Tell Me, My Love

Close your eyes for just one second
And tell me what it is you see.

Cover your ears for just one second
And tell me what it is you hear.

Forget about me for just one second
And tell me if it hurts.


For when I close my eyes
Your image is what I see.

For when I cover my ears
Your voice floats through my mind.

And when I forget about you, for even a second
It hurts worse than pain itself.

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"I Believe we are divine by nature." -Jewel

Grace is the refinement of a soul over time. -Jewel
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Rhiannon
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1 posted 10-04-1999 06:14 PM       View Profile for Rhiannon   Email Rhiannon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rhiannon's Home Page   View IP for Rhiannon

this is a very beautiful poem, i love how simple it is and how much power it holds.
Lynn
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Rhiannon...Thanks for the comment...


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"I Believe we are divine by nature." -Jewel

Grace is the refinement of a soul over time. -Jewel
Denise
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I thought this was beautiful Lynn!

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Denise
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Lynn...this is very well done, you speak from your heart and I like that

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