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Open Poetry #3

Tell Me, My Love

Lynn
Member

since 1999-09-20

Posts 316
Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.

0 posted 1999-10-04 06:12 PM

Tell Me, My Love

Close your eyes for just one second
And tell me what it is you see.

Cover your ears for just one second
And tell me what it is you hear.

Forget about me for just one second
And tell me if it hurts.

For when I close my eyes
Your image is what I see.

For when I cover my ears
Your voice floats through my mind.

And when I forget about you, for even a second
It hurts worse than pain itself.

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"I Believe we are divine by nature." -Jewel

Grace is the refinement of a soul over time. -Jewel

Rhiannon
Member

since 1999-07-28

Posts 95
Fayetteville, TN USA

1 posted 1999-10-04 06:14 PM

this is a very beautiful poem, i love how simple it is and how much power it holds.

Lynn
Member

since 1999-09-20

Posts 316
Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.

2 posted 1999-10-04 07:34 PM

Rhiannon...Thanks for the comment...

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"I Believe we are divine by nature." -Jewel

Grace is the refinement of a soul over time. -Jewel

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 1999-10-04 07:59 PM

I thought this was beautiful Lynn!

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Denise

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

4 posted 1999-10-04 09:55 PM

Lynn...this is very well done, you speak from your heart and I like that

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Man can not discover new oceans unless he has the courage to lose sight of the shore.

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