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Rhiannon
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since 07-28-99
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0 posted 10-04-1999 05:51 PM       View Profile for Rhiannon   Email Rhiannon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rhiannon's Home Page   View IP for Rhiannon

The loss I feel is nothing but

An afterthought

To the love you've given me

I've never felt so much of something

So much but

Now I wish I could be

More to you.


I've dreamt of us together since

I've known

That you could love me too

And it's been everything I hoped

Everything, soon

I can be

More to you.


I've held your hand in hard times

I hoped

I could help you and get you through

Then I realized you had to help yourself

It's helped, although

Maybe my help one day it will mean

More to you.


I've kissed your tears away-

Kissed your trembling lips as they

Spoke words that touched my heart.

I've known the secrets of your past

You've trusted me with the darkest parts.

I've loved you beyond anything I've felt

I've given my heart, my body, my words

My beloved, I'm afraid I can't be much

More to you.
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Lynn
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since 09-20-1999
Posts 321
Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.


1 posted 10-04-1999 06:29 PM       View Profile for Lynn   Email Lynn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lynn



Again...you've touched a part of my life with this poem. Like this one also.

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"I Believe we are divine by nature." -Jewel

Grace is the refinement of a soul over time. -Jewel
Denise
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2 posted 10-04-1999 08:28 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very lovely and touching!

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Denise
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since 07-05-99
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Touching
Seymour Tabin
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since 07-07-99
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4 posted 10-05-1999 09:51 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Rhiannon,
Well done.
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