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She Came To Me

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Andrew Scott
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0 posted 10-04-1999 05:14 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Andrew Scott

My heart of hearts she came to me
Bearing the gift of ecstasy
Answering my desirous dreams
Of hope's eternal expectancy

Await no more my lady said
Lie within my body's embrace
For on this night I'll be your bed
This lover's heart will beat the pace

Explore these curves of giving flesh
Your searching lips bring to my own
Make of these limbs a lover's mesh
Linger for pleasures since unknown

Set afire this very skin
Consume this body that is new
To claim my treasures deep within
The gift it holds burns all for you

I held her gift most tenderly
Becoming bold where once was meek
Daring to touch all so gently
Her greatest pleasures I did seek

No longer shy, no long coy
Across her skin with tender kiss
Within her eye's reflected joy
Within her sighs resounding bliss

All I could give I gave to her
Our bodies in perfect union
What was my dream now my lover
True heart and soul's companion

My heart of hearts she came to me
Bearing the gift of ecstasy
Answering my desirous dreams
Now all my hopes reality


[This message has been edited by Andrew Scott (edited 10-04-1999).]
© Copyright 1999 Andrew Scott - All Rights Reserved
RainbowGirl
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1 posted 10-04-1999 06:05 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

This brought back some memories .. ..ooops, well you know what I mean..LOL

HUGS

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Lynn
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2 posted 10-04-1999 06:17 PM       View Profile for Lynn   Email Lynn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lynn



Words could not express how I feel about this poem. It really hit home. I loved it.

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Grace is the refinement of a soul over time. -Jewel
Rhiannon
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3 posted 10-04-1999 06:18 PM       View Profile for Rhiannon   Email Rhiannon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rhiannon's Home Page   View IP for Rhiannon

this is really wonderful....i love the way it flows and the meaning touches me....

[This message has been edited by Rhiannon (edited 10-04-1999).]
Andrew Scott
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4 posted 10-04-1999 07:19 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

RainbowGirl: Hope they were pleasant memories and yes I know what you mean. Thanks for the Hugs.

Lynn: You are most kind. Thank you

Rhiannon: Again, my thanks for your comments. Glad I could write something that others find personal meaning in.
hoot_owl_rn
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5 posted 10-04-1999 10:00 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Very nice Sir. Andrew thanks for the read

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Balladeer
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6 posted 10-04-1999 10:05 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Excellent, Andrew. Erotic with class and romantic with style. Nicely done.
Sally S.
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7 posted 10-04-1999 11:44 PM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

I love a poem you can feel...and you can really feel this one. Simply beautiful, Andrew.
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8 posted 10-05-1999 12:35 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Simply lovely!
A Romantic Heart
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9 posted 10-05-1999 12:50 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

A very sensual poem...whew! could feel the paint coming off the walls from the passion
and romance here!

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 10-05-1999).]
Toerag
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10 posted 10-05-1999 06:57 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Andrew...many nice things about this man! (One of the first things I noticed is that it didn't slam poor old Toe)...Good work old man....
Iloveit
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11 posted 10-05-1999 09:24 AM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

andrew, really nice, and hey is it cheating to ditto Balladeer? he said it perfectly
Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 10-05-1999 09:37 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Scot,
Enjoyed the read, well done.
Andrew Scott
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13 posted 10-05-1999 12:31 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

My most sincere thanks to you all. Although writing this piece was a true pleasure in and of itself, that joy is flamed anew by your kind and generous responses… especially from so many who's works I have come to admire and opinions I have come to respect. I humbly bow to you all with gratitude.
Pepper
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14 posted 10-05-1999 12:51 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

oh my......I LOVE THIS PIECE Andrew.....simply exquisite.......

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15 posted 10-05-1999 01:17 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Thumbs up, Andrew! (And since I have to let go of both my cough syrup AND my kleenex to give a double thumbs up, you know it's good! LOL)
Andrew Scott
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16 posted 10-05-1999 03:23 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

So, Pepper... let me know how you really feel Honestly... thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed.

And the Lady Suthern be illin'. Well... a super big thanks for takin' the time and energy to read and give me the two big thumbs up. Just as long as ya never give me two big Toes... one's more than enough! LOL! Muchas Gracias senora Suthern! Take care and get well.
Toerag
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17 posted 10-05-1999 03:42 PM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Andrew...this truly was a great poem my friend, write some more serious stuff....I wish I could meet ya some time...maybe the pleasure will happen some day....
LngJhnAg
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18 posted 10-05-1999 04:42 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Mr Scott - I enjoyed this poem. It had class, and showed that romance exists within your heart. You must show us more. Naturally, you must not do this when the rest of us are posting, but wait instead for a respectful amount of time to elapse so we other men don't look too oafish in comparison.
Marilyn
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19 posted 10-05-1999 10:10 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

ahh Mr. Scott....As I said in my attempt to piece this place together. You carry yourself with elegance and style. Very well done Sir Scott. I did find that poem or rather call to posts piece you refered me to in your reply. Took some doing because it was on page 16...LOL. I posted on it but then this thing broke. Keep the words flowing.

Marilyn.
Andrew Scott
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20 posted 10-06-1999 11:32 AM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Yo Toe: Thanks again... If you're ever in So California look me up. The radio station's doors are always open for ya.

Sir LJA… what can I say to that? I am definitely a romantic at heart as my wife can attest too. But after reading some of your wonderful work as well, I say your comment is pretty high praise. Thank you so kindly.

Marilyn: I noticed you success at finding that distant piece just before all went to hell. Thanks for taking the time and effort to dig it up. It sure was a lot of fun! Also thank you for kindness here… it is very much appreciated.


[This message has been edited by Andrew Scott (edited 10-06-1999).]
Toerag
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21 posted 10-06-1999 11:35 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Andrew....when LongJohn puts his mind to it, and has the time...some of his stuff is the best I've ever read....he just hasn't done so in a while. (Don't let him read this though, that prick doesn't need any more ego than he now gets from his sweet misled bride)
Honeybee
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22 posted 04-12-2010 01:03 AM       View Profile for Honeybee   Email Honeybee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Honeybee

I absolutely love this!!!
 
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