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The Death of Love

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DreamEvil
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0 posted 10-04-1999 04:12 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Pray you suffer not the death of love.
"I love you no more" are words you should fear.
I hope it is a thing you learn not of.
Your heart breaks again with each unshed tear.

"I love you no more" are words you should fear.
Words sink in your soul and tear it apart.
Your heart breaks again with each unshed tear.
Love should be avoided right from the start.

Words sink in your soul and tear it apart.
Your soul embraces winter's bitter cold.
Love should be avoided right from the start.
Love is the cruelest of lies, truth be told.

Your soul embraces winter's bitter cold.
Lock away your heart to avoid love's spell.
Love is the cruelest of lies, truth be told.
The death of love is a true living Hell.

Lock away your heart to avoid love's spell.
Words of romance are ashes on the tongue.
The death of love is a true living Hell.
If you must, suffer love while you are young.

Words of romance are ashes on the tongue.
I hope it is a thing you learn not of.
If you must, suffer love while you are young.
Pray you suffer not the death of love.


©1999 DreamEvil


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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

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Skyfyre
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1 posted 10-04-1999 05:31 PM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

This is a pain like no other ... and your verse has done it justice.

Pray these words never haunt your heart again.

Nocht

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"Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus"
(Now as I hear this bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.")


Systematic Decay
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2 posted 10-04-1999 05:41 PM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

Wonderful poem, Dream.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-
Dragoness
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3 posted 10-05-1999 10:12 AM       View Profile for Dragoness   Email Dragoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dragoness's Home Page   View IP for Dragoness

Been there.......feeling this one deeply.

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.

Sunshine
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4 posted 10-07-1999 05:15 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Ah DE, indeed you look into the soul of my loved one, and suffer for her, as do I.

You have read my diatribe on her situation - it has worsened, and she has indeed, suffered the death of love.
Poet deVine
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5 posted 10-07-1999 07:43 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

I've also suffered this many times. That's why I don't believe in love anymore. You've done a good job on this one..lots of emotion within the form... I like that.
Severn
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6 posted 10-07-1999 07:56 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

You know, Dream - there's a simple phrase I've adopted:
'Love like you've never been hurt before'
Keep that heart of yours open, my friend. Liked your work of course.

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...he knows the needs of my passions, he sates the searching of my soul...
Andrew Scott
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7 posted 10-07-1999 08:08 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Truly suffered it only once... second time around I managed to keep it.

I will say this... you've got real emotion poured into this one, that's not to say your other offerings are lacking in such, because they never do... I guess what I'm saying is that I can really feel the pain in this one and I'm sorry you've been made to suffer so. All the same, thanks for sharing your talent... I bow to you and yours.
DreamEvil
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8 posted 10-07-1999 08:21 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

This reposting suited the mood of several of those I hold dear. I believe it well explains it's particular pain.

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

Justbleu
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9 posted 11-14-2003 12:39 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

That is one of the worst pains in the world.....
I always liked your writing!!!!
Hope all is well with you!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

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